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person Killer Kadoogan
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait to see where this is going!!! A very good start so far! Hope to see updating soon- with lots of shagging! As always, happy writing, dearie!! Tengo que irme! Salud!
Hugs and kisses,
Killer K ;p
person ladydeathfaerie
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi there! i\'m reading this now, too.

looking forward to more snarky, evil,
plotting Snape.

~blessings~
ldf
person Zoltaire the Inscrutable
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m baaaaccck! Bravo! Three chapters and are we loving it? Oh yes we are! I loved the whole Severus leaving a trail of sore throats behind him. That was great. Flashbacks are great! Frustrated Hermione and Patient-Frustrated Severus are great!

Well, I think this story definitely won\'t be in the shadow of Part 1.

Great job, AGAIN!

Zoltaire the Inscrutable
person firewall
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL of course he would bring up the incident using the Relaxo...that was his favourite, I believe. I am so glad that you are continuing and posting so quickly.
person JW
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 1-2 - can I hope this eventually turns out to be a romance? She needs to admit she needs the Potions master!! Listen to the house elf, Hermy.... don\'t waste your time on the other guys! Poor Severus, holding out for a WHOLE YEAR without her. Yup, that\'s love.
person DawnEB
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the additional dialogue, a real improvement
person ancientgirl
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
She should have known that nothing can compare to Severus. I\'m wondering what scheme he\'s plotted.
person Stormi
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating so fast. Can hardly wait for the next chapter.
person EriWren
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!
person lovethelab
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione!! I really felt sorry for her - and that Severus decided to peek in on her just made it worse. I hope Hermione does not fall again, well at least not until Severus is ready for soemthing more than just a good screw.