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person ha ha
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool beans and keep it up
person EriWren
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m glad that you have something that helps you get through. And As bad as this sounds... We benifit from it too. YAY. I seriously love this fic.
person Zoltaire the Inscrutable
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Large Lemons! Congratulations, you have reduced me to *squealing* Grrr. Love the thought conversation. You know, I think that is almost more effective than hours of foreplay between them. He\'s in her thoughts before he\'s in her. Oh Goodness! Freaud would be so proud!

Really can\'t wait till the next chapter. Could we have more mind-speak, PLEASE?

Zoltaire the Inscrutable
person Stormi
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5


Ms. Figgggggg!!!!!! (Lots of whining here.) What a horrible place to leave off at. Now what am I suppose to do while I wait for your next chapter? Hummm....


Seriously, keep up the great work.


Stormi
person carrie
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im smiling and im speechless
person JTBJAB
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear god, I actually heard him growl!!!!!!

Please update soon!!!!
person firewall
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
JW? The \"relaxo\" relaxes the neck/throat muscles...need I say more? hahahahahaha
person Severessa
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope that your situation gets much better very quickly! Your story is really good, especially since there may be a chance that these two socially-inept dunderheads might get together after all.
person Stormi
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4 was GREAT! Keep up the good work and good luck with your current situation.



Stormi
person beeky63
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful and quick update, thank you so much. I\'m very sorry to hear that things are not to good for you right now. If you need someone to talk to, I offer a sympathic and unbiased ear. Just leave me a little note on your next update, it\'s the least I can do to repay you for sharing your wonderful writing talent with us.
Hugs and kisses.
Toodles.