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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 5 - hey, you cut off the chapter just when it was starting to get really, really hot! Get back to your keyboard right now!! And when will Severus realize that HE is addicted to her and needs her too? Just thump him on the head....
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, she is going to be soooo sore!!!
I am looking forward to your next chapter!
Well done on this chapter!!!
I am looking forward to your next chapter!
Well done on this chapter!!!
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
firewall - thanks for the \"Relaxo\" spell explanation! I couldn\'t figure out why he\'d want to \"relax\" his ... you know ....
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay now, you warned us of \'LARGE\' lemons. What about \'HARD\' lemons?! Very, very, very \'HARD\' lemons!
Great job. I sure did enjoy the tender Snape at the end (even if for only two or three lines) but I am very glad that he\'s still soooo Snarky and gittish. Sweet, Tender Snape kind of makes my arse twitch. (waaay to much \'French Kiss\')
Looking forward to the next chapter. Duh, duh, dummmmmm. How will Hermione react? Will she ever recover? Will she have a permanent fresco of the living room wall impressed on her backside?! Maybe she and Dumbledore can start a club, he\'s got the London Underground on his knee, she\'s got stucco on her back. Tee-hee-hee!
Taa
Zoltaire the Inscrutable
Great job. I sure did enjoy the tender Snape at the end (even if for only two or three lines) but I am very glad that he\'s still soooo Snarky and gittish. Sweet, Tender Snape kind of makes my arse twitch. (waaay to much \'French Kiss\')
Looking forward to the next chapter. Duh, duh, dummmmmm. How will Hermione react? Will she ever recover? Will she have a permanent fresco of the living room wall impressed on her backside?! Maybe she and Dumbledore can start a club, he\'s got the London Underground on his knee, she\'s got stucco on her back. Tee-hee-hee!
Taa
Zoltaire the Inscrutable
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 4 - wonderful plan! I\'m glad she\'s not insisting on hanging out with Ron and Harry; she\'s smarter. The chapter title - \"Her Rightful Place\" - was sort of a tease, \'cuz I thought her \"rightful place\" was ... you know .... in Severus\' bed, but perhaps a future chapter??? Thanks for updating!
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Of course there are *large lemons* on the way...Severus is on the way!! *wink, wink, nudge* hahaha Great chapters 4 and 5. I\'m sorry though that we are reaping the benefits of your personal turmoil though. Hope things work out positively for you soon.
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh...that was perfect. Just enough angst to get you going. Don\'t wait too long for that lemon now! As I have said before, very, very well done. I hope Hermione appreciates what she\'s got in old sex-toy Snapey-poo!
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!
My husband won\'t be getting too much sleep tonight!
Lucky me! He\'s British. Talking dirty is soooo much better with a British accent.
YOU GO GIRL!
Can\'t wait for the next update.
Toodles.
My husband won\'t be getting too much sleep tonight!
Lucky me! He\'s British. Talking dirty is soooo much better with a British accent.
YOU GO GIRL!
Can\'t wait for the next update.
Toodles.
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh yessssss!!!!!
hot violent Snape smut! you are a
goddess, my dear. a goddess.
~blessings~
ldf
hot violent Snape smut! you are a
goddess, my dear. a goddess.
~blessings~
ldf
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t think any of us could hold ourselves from him for too long either. But I\'m glad that he also admitted to her that he also needed her. And while neither of them want more, or seem to want more than what they are about to do, but perhaps in the coming days with working together they will realize that no one else can satisfy each other. Great chapter.