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person JW
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 6 - a total of four purple vials and two bottles of healing draught - WOW! He lasted a long time. Too bad he left instead of going another round in the morning. Now how are they going to get any privacy at Hogwarts?? You write some of the prettiest PWP. More, more! And eventually there should be a simple plot (or epilogue) - like the war ends and Severus and Hermione live happily together ever after, making gallons of purple stuff.
person carrie
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh damn talk about a cliffhanger....lol
person snapescat
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love stories that are updated quickly. Thanks for this. I had a giggle when they were in the headmaster\'s office. I could just see the blush go through her and the smirk on his face as he observed her discomfort. I also thought that the mind speak was incredibly well written.
You write very well for such a fast writer. I like your style. I am preparing myself for the \"big lemons\"
person JTBJAB
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Severus speech was amazing - well done!!!!

I can\'t wait to read how Hermione settles into the castle!!!
person Catpower
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic that you update so quickly but what a place to leave us! I just can\'t wait for Sev to get down to business again. Fwoarr to come, I hope.
person Ms_Figg
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
JW...I just had to respond to your post. Ye gods man! Have you no mercy? If Severus had stayed, he would have KILLED her! ::shaking head:: She\'s going to have a bad morning as it is...
person Snapelover11
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was the perfect treat after waiting for this installment. Thank you so much...really...thank you for making Hermione give in. It was worth the wait.
person Joyous
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love you story, and I am so glad you decided to continue with it... Personally, I don\'t think i would\'ve lasted as long as Hermione did...
person Killer Kadoogan
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, girl, where does it all come from?! Such great writing! Hope to see you update soon, and very sorry that things aren\'t going well for you. I sincerely hope that you fully understand how much joy you give to your readers. A wonderful gift of imagination that gives you no real \"compensation\" other than the knowledge that you have really brightened your reader\'s day with your generous gift! A very real heartfelt THANK YOU! And, God willing, things in your life will straighten out. Happy writing and know that you have many loyal readers thinking of you and wishing you all the best. Tengo que irme! Salud!
Great teddybear hugs!
Killer K
person lovethelab
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t think I would have held out as long - - especially with that dead sexy voice echoing in my head! I\'m just a sucker for a low seductive growl! Great chapter BTW, Severus sure knows how to seduce her brain as well as everything else - makes you wonder if he had been spying on her all year!