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i don\'t mean to be mean or anything, but i kinda hate severus rite now, and i semi-hate hermione for still liking snape...well, i still enjoy ur writing, i hope u kno that i just needed to get that out, i still love ur story and hopefully snape can make up for himself... til next chapter!!!

OMG, that was one of the best chapters i have ever read! i loved it...the sincerity, the truth, and just the whole thing. i can\'t wait for the next chapter!!! i really wanna find out wat happens next, i wonder how hermione will end up and with who, and i wonder wat will happen to snape.. please update asap!

oh god what is going to happen what are you going to do. oh i can\'t wait update update!!

Yes, and something dark will be inside that woman again. Great chapter. I didn\'t think she would be too put out about what she looked or felt like. I also think she will be needing his services again. You are correct, I don\'t think she could ever be satisfied by any other man again.

I do hope though that Severus admits to her a little more freely that he needs her just as much as she needs him.

I\'m looking forward to your next chapter.

Great stories (parts 1 and 2)! Very hot and erotic. I think, though, that after reading the latest two chapters, I agree with Catpower. This should be classified as S&M, and I\'d like to see this realization explicitely explored more in the characters. To go on as if the last meeting was just normal sex is unrealistic for the characters.

No kidding she\'s been ruined! Literally and figuratively....lucky girl. hahahaha Seriously, a tidy chapter that will form a nice bridge between her former residence and her new residence. I\'m looking forward to see how things go at Hogwarts under the watchful eyes of the students and staff. Hmmmmm, could be interesting.

Wow. That was a shag. I\'m a bit shocked actually - it was like consensual rape. I loved chapter 5 - found it exciting to think of such a passionate man inside one\'s head. And then chapter 6 happened. And then chapter 7 showed that the injuries were real and not imagined due to drama.

This is a very good story and I shall certainly keep reading. I do think though, that maybe this story should be classified as S&M. I know HG/SS aren\'t using any equipment (yet?) but chapter 6 seemed very violent to me. I didn\'t think that about Part 1 so much - a bit of rough and pain is still normal sex IMO (and I like it). But leaving bruises all over her back and trouble walking the next day - that\'s sadism in my book.

I would find it interesting to read a bit of exploration into HG realising and coming to terms with the fact that she\'s a masochist (\'cause I really think that\'s what she is, here). Or alternatively, confronting SS and saying it was OK the one time because she was so sex-starved but he\'s got to be more gentle next time or she will deny him.

Excellent, I\'m looking forward to more, this sooooooooooo HOT!!!

great story :) update soon :)

Where the heck did that come from? You have taken your writing to a whole new level. Very impressive...smutty but impressive. *VBG*