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person ancientgirl
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sad chapter. While I only see Snape as a sappy character sometimes in fics and enjoy the fluffiness, I also like the portrayal of him this way too. While I believe he is a man that can love and has loved, he is still dark.

I do though hope you don\'t keep them apart permanantly. I don\'t expect him to give her roses and teddy bears but I\'m hoping for a happy ending here.
person anay
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant,
but, do \"temper\" him! Them! Please!
person Snapelover11
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This came so quickly, I hope anothe part os oon to follow! Poor Hermione...I mean...lucky Hermione! Fantastic and waiting for more!
person Koda
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lmao, I loved your author note.
person deathraven
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg i just love love love this story its so good!!!!! well i can\'t wait for the next chapter to come up!!!
person luvssnape
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love how Severus can be so brutal yet caring at the same time. You write his characterization perfectly.
person Gracie
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you. I don\'t even know what else to say. You update almost too fast for me to keep up...and the quality....OOOoooohh the quality. Amazing. You are hands down the best author on this site. I love you.
person JW
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 7 - nope, nothing inside her now, but you can fix that soon. (grin!) Loved the poor raven - \"I swear I will transform you into a featherduster before you can fly ten feet.
person JW
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 7 - PS - if Severus had stayed overnight, he could\'ve made her breakfast in bed! Given her a massage, applied salve personally, snuggled.... he wouldn\'t have had to kill her!
person Lindsey
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was kinda sad... i think snape deserved to wait that long, he was the one who didn\'t want any more \"contact\" with her after the first time. but i guess him being a guy and all, he blamed it on her, so i think i see where his perspective is from... i\'ll just wait and see till the next chapter!! til then, keep up the good writing!