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Wonderful!!! But this better not be the ending - they better get back together. But like another reviewer said, please don\'t make him give her roses and teddy bears. That\'s not Sev. At least make them get back together! Please! If you do I\'ll give you roses and teddy bears!

Dear god, you are an amazing writer! Part 1 left me a soaked puddle of...well, soaked. And quivering. Geez. Keep writing- for the love of all things holy, KEEP WRITING!

Wonderful story so far, it\'s very engaging.

I wont sent you a teddy bear or roses, I think a bottle of scotch is much more stylish.

can\'t wait for the next bit

ooooo will he be able to stay away from her sexually, they\'ll be working pretty closely from now on, can he resist her *grin*

Awww come on! I\'ll find a way to sneak a \'Bondage-Fun\' teddy bear and a dozen black roses into your email box if it\'s the last thing I do! MWA-HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Zoltaire the Inscrutable SHALL prevail!

\'Hmm-hmm\' Now that that is out of my system, great chapter! I see this is really turning into something other than PWP. Very nicely done, bringing in a sense of urgency to the story now. I can see myself behind Hermione with a bull-whip! \"Work faster, Slave! That \'Relaxo\' spell must be stronger!\" \"Stronger, I say!\"

Can\'t wait for the next chapter and all its snarky goodness! Taa!

Zoltaire the Inscrutable

Ch 8 - ACK!! After this horrid talk with Hermione, NOW he has to go face Voldemort. Wicked author!! Sheesh, Hermione insisted he tell her how he felt, and she\'s got it now. She doesn\'t even know he has just been summoned. Such powerful words you wrote for Severus - \"someone like me could never have someone like you

It\'s unbelievable how addicted I am to your story... I get so excited to see when you\'ve updated. And I\'m extremely thankful that you update as fast as you do. I was actually falling away from the Hermione/ Severus stories when i read your story... although I still had my favorites that I\'m waiting for updates on (She said What? By Ladydeathfaerie and \"Unlikely Connections,\" and \"Tying the Knot\" by LadyTuesday)

Severus\' last confession to Hermione was brilliant... And let me just say it\'s about damn time! Though i have to say, I\'m annoyed Hermione let him leave... it\'s just one of those things that you just don\'t do...

1. You don\'t wear white after labor day
2. You don\'t go swimming after you just ate a heavy meal
3. You do NOT let the person you love walk out your door.... lol Can\'t wait for an update.

Good chapter. What a drama queen Sev is - although what he says IS sort of justified by his life. Still, he knows how to milk it for all it\'s worth, doesn\'t he? Now Hermione won\'t be able to resist him even more and Sev seems to have actually convinced himself with his own speech that he can avoid Hermione (yeah, right - he\'s going to be next to her 24 hours a day). I do appreciate these quick updates a lot.

Perhaps it\'s best to end the story here...ALTHOUGH I\'M DYING TO READ MORE!!!!!

Ms. Figg......You are truly the Faulkner of Fan/Fuck fiction. (Is there a Pulitzer or Booker Prize for erotica?? If not, there should be!!

Ohhh...I never expected to hear him say all that to her! You story is like an onion. I thought it was one thing and layer after layer, it becomes another. I am very happy and touched by the turn of events. Anyone can write smut. It takes a real writer to make thier reader see and feel. You have done just that with this chapter. Well done, and as always...looking for more.