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Chapter 12

It may have been short but it was really, really powerful!

Keep up the great work.

Stormi

I see that you have chosen to disobey Lord Voldemort\'s orders, despite my gracious review of your previous instalment.
How dare you continue to write licentious and lusty scenes featuring Severus Snape? I command you to destroy this vile abomination, this travesty, at once. Then you may begin work on MY story.
It must contain lemons such as this world had never seen.
Huge and juicy and all featuring ME, Lord Voldemort, and attractive young blondes, preferably with large breasts.
But what do I see here? Even Wormtail is getting in on the act!
Do not disobey Lord Voldemort\'s orders, Muggle.............I command more tangy citrine action than a greengrocer on Pancake day!
If you fail, I shall E mail the killing curse to your inbox at sunset!MWAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!

Ch 9 - Hello! I am one of those pesky \"readers foaming at the mouth for a happy ending.\" If there is character death, let it be Lucius and Voldemort. I think a happy ending would be quite compatible for the story theme of \"What Was I Thinking\" - e.g., for Severus to realize he was wrong in thinking \"Your beauty isn\'t meant for me\" or wrong in thinking \"I want you to marry for love, .... Your name listed in history books. This will never happen with me. Ever.\" I mean, in the first part, he was wrong in thinking that Hermione would never want him. So a happy ending could fit in, and he could still be snarky (and sexy). Please??????? Ummm..... I\'ll send Death Eaters to your door? (makes hopeful but evil glare at author)

You are a very prolific writer...I was amazed at having 2 chapters to read tonight. I can see why you would have wanted to end the story at chapter 8 but I must say t he chapter I just read was very powerful and I\'m glad it was written...I don\'t know if it was 8 or 9(The Phoenix song?) Anyway, kudos on a well written couple of chapters...I feel really really sombre right now.

oh girl you had better not stop!! and if you do you should start another story, you are such a good writer!!! update and soon please!!

Deathraven

These stories are beautifully written. Unlike most fanfiction, these are written with intelligence and vision. They are my dirty little secret.

I love this story so much and your characterisation of snape. Please don\'t kill him yet. I know you feel its is finished and by continuing you run the rsikof writing a repetitive lemon, but I think Severus needs to survive by his own strength. It would be great if he could hold dominion over hermione and in that kinda S&M arrangment create a way that will allow him to be happy withouty the teddy bears and roses. Hell, I just like the passion in your stories and don\'t want it to stop. Withdrawal is a killer.

Great chapter. I\'m looking forward to more.

ahhh every one together we love our sevvie!
thanks this is such a great story, i never review so feel really special, keep writing!
:)
Princess

PS re Ch 8 - I meant \"horrid talk with Hermione\" as in \"horrid emotionally-draining talk with Hermione where he walks out on her, seemingly forever and without hope of ever being happy\" - but very well-written. Just horrid for Severus.