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Hmm. Getting a bit too kittenish in the latest installment!! Please reassure your dutiful, slavish readers that Hermione\'s cursory perusal of Snape\'s psych book is merely the foreshadowing of more luscious lemons in the future!!

Two great chapters there. I\'m really glad that you decided to keep going with this story - it is developing well. I have never come across the idea of developing a spell using scientific methods before - v interesting. So what does H do to adjust the spell, I wonder. Different wand flicks? Extra words? A key piece of parchment with the precise effect of the spell written on it so that the exact spell, when spoken, will be evoked? It\'s got me thinking.

But the poor rats! I bet Hagrid is crying his eyes out in his hut.

Ch 10 - (holds head in hands) What was I thinking ..... I hoped to encourage author to write HAPPY ending, not painful - agonizing - bone-breaking - nightmarish ending, which looks a bit more probable from this chapter! Yikes, I sure hope she has that Relaxo spell waiting for Severus at the Apparition point. (backs away from author) Nice Figgy... nice Figgy.... Relaxo, Figgy!!

wow... this actually has a plot to it!! it\'s good!!! Um, in the pheonix chapter, it\'s spelt Pomfrey, not Pomphrey. (Not picking, i hate it when cannons are spelt wrong!!!) Apart from that, it\'s great!! WOOT!!!

Ch 12 - THANK YOU for letting him live!! So glad she tested things on those poor rats. I\'m also glad she\'s realizing that he can\'t say \"I love you\" like regular (non- Death Eater spy) people, and she doesn\'t even know much about his family background. Dare I say there\'s light at the end of this tunnel? I like the way you continue to deepen the Severus and Hermione characterizations. I hate fics where Hermione is shallow, and she\'s certainly not shallow here.

girl you better not let him die, and if you do and end the story that will only be okay if you start another story!! hehehe oh well update update!!

Poor sweet Severus. Will he use the mind connection to call out to Hermione? Will he tell her where he is so she can get him? Please hurry, I feel this is reaching a climax (no pun intended) and I want so badly to see the end. Whatever that may bring.

Hi, I have to tell you, I have enjoyed reading this piece very much. However, in reference to the last chapter, what were you thinking? I used to make my living writing and you are very talented. Yet, I am one of those hopeless romantics who would like to see Severus have a shot at happiness. Again, you are very talented, seem to have original ideas and present them very well. As for the sex scenes, while I am not offended by them, I don\'t think they are really the vocal point of this piece. The mental and emotional push and shove between the two of them is much more interesting. Have some heart; give the wizard a chance.

Goodness I like this story. I keep waiting and get all excited when I see it pop up again all updated. Thank you very much for sharing it. Please keep it up!

Evil teasing author. I must have more! Please