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Ch 11 - okay, he\'s still alive, right? right? Sigh.... thank you for the chapter. Please update again soon! (happy ending.... happy ending....)

Okay no teddy bears and roses, but at least let him live! I\'d rather him live and not be with Hermione than die at all!

This story certainly isn\'t a PWP anymore. In fact, this is actually one of the best stories I\'ve come across. And to that I say Well Done!

Nicely phrased short chappie. Wasn\'t sure if Hermione encountered him after Sev apparated back to Hogwarts or if Hermione came to rescue him - in front of Voldie though..

Noooo! My poor Sevvie-poo! (yes, yes, I know he\'d avada me in a heart-beat for saying that, if he weren\'t a fictional character) Great job with the torture scene. It was very sterile. Sterile/clinical is, surprisingly enough, usually best at conveying the sense of horror needed in a torture scene. Think about every horror movie you\'ve ever seen. The ones that scare the spit out of me are the ones where there\'s no musical build-up, where there\'s no \'let\'s get into the character\'s head and make the audience FEEL how scared they are.\' It\'s almost always the detached, clinical telling that scares people the most. It kind of lends an aura of hoplessness and inevitability to the whole situation that just magnifies the terror. I DO hope you won\'t kill of Severus. But if you do, you could look into the world of ghost/mortal relations. think of all the possibilites there! Cause we all know, Severus would have PLENTY of unfinished business to attend to.

Great chapter, as always. Taa.

Zoltaire the Inscrutable

Oh now that was cruel! To leave us with that! More damn you wench more! Please?

I apologise for the lack of reviewing, but I spent the last couple of days at a friends house, and didn\'t have access to a computer!

But kinda cool to come back and have sooo many to read!!!!

Speaking of reading... this story is progressing and I am becoming incredibly engrossed in this story! So please, please don\'t let Severus be dead!

Great story! I do hope you don\'t opt for character death, or an angst-y ending. No need for kittens and flowers. Think about it. Your Hermione is ruined for other men. And Snape (yours and JKR\'s) has had a really crappy life. He deserves a bit of happiness. Give it too him. I *highly* doubt JKR will, in her final revealment.

Wow. Angsty. ...Um, did I mention I like Happy Endings

Well I really lucked tonight, 3 incredible chapters to read. I was a little concerned there. I thought Voldemort had lost control and killed him. Superbe writing. Thank you