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Oh my goodness what a cliffy!!!! Need More!!!!AAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!

JW, in part one, (with a little creative license) it is explained that Severus can apparate from or to his rooms or office to answer or return from the summons of the Dark Lord. He usually cannot function after a summons because of the application of the Cruciatus Curse, and would probably die outside the gates of Hogwarts otherwise. I neglected to rehash that in this story. Sorry bout that.

Cool chapter - it wasn\'t confusing at all! Well at least not to me, but then I am strange *giggle* I am so glad that Severus is alright!!! Phew, the stress of waiting to see what had happened!

Chapter 12

What a very tender scene. I hope the Snape appreciates all her hard work but he probably won\'t show it. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Stormi

Mmmm...very nice. I laughed out loud when Snape gave points. Mmmm...Severus....Oh, sorry...bit distracted. More delicious action please!

I\'ve been sadly remiss concerning reviews, sooo sorry. An author who updates at least daily deserves better readers ;) Anyway, here we go: I LOVE IT ALL! And I am at a total loss as to what will happen, because every time I think I\'ve got the hang of your story it twists out of sight. So I decided to relax and let me take you along on you fucking amazing story ;) I writing this story gives you as much joy as reading it gives me, then I\'m sure you find comfort in it :) Two thumbs up to one really great writer who keeps us readers on our toes (and hopefully feeds them some lemonade)! hehe

Bless Hermione... babying Severus! Hehehe... the image that brings, brilliant chapter which was wonderfully long as well!!!!

Ch 13 - well, if he\'s going to be stubborn and refuse to even kiss her, I say she should just dose him with a love potion! Heck, I was expecting something to \"happen\" when she was spoon-feeding him the soup - mmm, sliding the spoon between his lips.... Thanks for having Eli appear - he\'s a cutie. So, if we just keep reviewing, you\'ll keep writing new chapters?

Great job, as always Ms_Figg! Dost mine eyes deceive me? or did you post an unseemly amount of chapters in a span of two days? Not that I mind! Oh no, no, no! I don\'t mind in the least! See, I was able to read four (yes that\'s right dears!) FOUR new chapters in one sitting! FOUR I SAY!

Now, as the orchard is clearly in sight, I shall start scrounging for my gallon ice-cream buckets for the harvest! I fully expect to have a good dozen full by the end of this story. Lemonade for ages! Ahhh. nothing like a sour lemon mixed with the sweet. good dreams a-coming (once again, pun TOTALLY intended!)

Can\'t wait for the next chapter! Taa!

Zoltaire the Inscrutable

I know!
Add romance to the details...
That will tell me that you plan to have them end up together in a more permanent way!