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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What the hell did just happen? Not fair, lady, not fair at all. I am all tense, just waiting for our damned bullheaded potions master to come around. I can\'t imagine how poor Hermione must feel, after that passionate speech!
Can\'t wait, just can\'t wait!
Can\'t wait, just can\'t wait!
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story :) youre doing such a great job.
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aaaarrrgggghhh! I so seriously feel for Hermione. He wouldn\'t listen to emotions. He wouldn\'t listen to verbal explanation of physical need. Time for the secret weapon. Dominatrix Hermione! Woo-hoo! Bring out the handcuffs and whips! We\'ll make him give us what we want! Yeah! You heard right! We\'ll make him give it to us! If Hermione isn\'t getting to have smut, I\'m not getting to read smut. If I\'m not getting to read smut, I\'m not happy, and neither is anyone around me! So please, please please, make Severus give Hermione smut! It\'s for the good of the country!
Once again, great chapter. am looking forward to next installment. Taa.
Zoltaire the Inscrutable
Zoltaire the Inscrutable
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the \"grumpy hospital wing\" Severus. Can\'t wait to see what happens next. I want them to be together so much.
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I admit it, I\'m addicted! To Snape and to this storyline. I\'m really glad that you kept them in character, b/c a lot of other stories have snape acting, well...good tempered. I am also glad that you didn\'t have him die...I am asucker for happy endings. Hopefully some lemony goodness will be coming soon
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOU PLEASE DON\'T WIND DOWN. <3
Great chapter.
Another, please? <3
Intensity! Yey!
Great chapter.
Another, please? <3
Intensity! Yey!
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updateing so quickly (again!!) I really am surprised that everytime I get onAFF I see an update! I love it! Anyway, I loved the part about Minerva and Albus. Helps when you can see the other side of the coin - plus talk about double standard if she was involved with Albus at such a young age! :-P I hope \"the talk\" will let Severus see how much he means to Hermione - and how much she means to him!! Can\'t wait! (Especially since you said that the citrus would be pouring in!)
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous! Fabulous! You\'ve addressed all my queries. I feel really well-informed about the characters\' exact positions now. Not to mention the details of how the Relaxo spell was developed. I am loving this story - Sev has style. The soup scene was hilarious.
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 16 - hey, he\'s not supposed to be able to disapparate within Hogwarts? I hope she has a tracking spell on him - this time, she might need to tie him down! Don\'t let him get away, Hermione! (BTW, that was a very lovely monologue you wrote for Hermione.)
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 13 & 14
Very well written. Keep up the great work.
Stormi