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person Killer Kadoogan
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Be sure to pick bunches, sweetie!!! I am so enamored with your story! Brilliant, dear! Simply brilliant!!! Can\'t wait for your tart brand of lemonade, I\'m getting sooo thirsty! Happy writing, mi chicquita! Tengo que irme! Salud!
Hugs and kisses!
Killer K :)
person Remetan
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, goody goody. I can\'t wait. This chapter was just wonderful.
person beeky63
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story and the plot thickens. Will Voldemort die? Will Severus finally be free to love Hermione openly? Don\'t keep us waiting. Update soon PPPPlllllleeeeaaaasssseeee.
Toodles.
person firewall
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15 You tease!!!!!! hahaha Naughty girl. Just get that pen on that paper and don\'t even think of using lemon juice for invisible ink!!!! Please, please update soon.
person Remetan
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, good God! I actually hurt after reading chapter 14! What is this, physical empathy? Damn You Ms_Figg! I await the next with baited breath!
person septentrion
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
review ch 14 : the story is enjoyable as well as the fact you update very often.
person JW
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 14 - \"honesty can be an aphrodisiac\" - but not very effective, judging by the lack of \"results\" from the aphrodisiac! C\'mon, slip him a love potion! BTW, very clever, to have Binns be the Potions sub - \"regaling your students with the History of Potions\" but not melting any cauldrons. Ahem....lemon orchards ahead? Thank you for not snuffing Severus! After your author\'s note in Ch 9 - \"character death is always a nice touch\" - that was a real concern.
person Snapelover11
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no you don\'t...no winding down for you! You have effectively wound us up! I am in love with this story. Siply put, one of the best. I like all the angst between them. But mostly, I really enjoy ALbus and Minerva. They are tangible, you know? Thank you for sticking this out for us, I know I will be forever thankful for your story. Please update soon. Want Lemons too!
person JW
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 15 - she has something to SHOW him?? Hmm, what could this be ... she hasn\'t grown any new body parts, has she? New knowledge read from \"Guide to caring for your lemon orchards\"? A sample love potion? This sounds good!!
person Allie
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes! We need some argument/refusal, some more persuasion, and then lemony goodness for all! I could say maybe about 2, maybe a 3rd for an epilogue, more chapters for the story. One for the persue/argue portion and the other for la limonada oolala! :)