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person Killer Kadoogan
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOO!!!!!!! You are such an evil, evil, vile, unrelenting tease!!! Oh, how could you?!! I\'m practically sobbing here in frustration! Such great writing! Though I hate to feed your ego, what with you leaving us all hanging! Naughty, naughty girl!!! I love Snape\'s middle name! Arsenius. So perfect for him! Please, please, please update SOON! You have left too many frustrated readers out there! Happy tart writing, as tart as you can! Tengo que irme! Salud!
Sobs and hair-pulling,
Killer K ;p
person beeky63
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh! You are soooooo EVIL!!!!! Such a tease! More please, (PANT, PANT,) MORE.
Toodles.
person beeky63
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, me again. I was just thinking that if Severus really wanted to punish Hermione, he would use the back door. Just a thought ( a delicious thought, but just a thought.)
Toodles.
person Addict
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You big tease! And now, instead of updating incessantly and waiting for the next installment (which had better be BURSTING with LEMONS GALORE), I have to leave for work! I can\'t believe this! You\'re so good, it, like, hurts. KEEP WRITING, and I\'m praying that there\'s some fulfilling, lemony goodness waiting for me when I get back to this screen! Thank you so much!
person JTBJAB
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol! Hermione is going to be needing to keep up her fluid intake with the rate she goes at! Jeez... she needs a bit of control! Meh, but then this is Severus...
person JTBJAB
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... hehehe! Fair play, I say.

Great chapter and those before it too! Can\'t wait till the next few are up!!!

Well done!!
person Remetan
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oy, on chapter 17. She did that...thing...and wow. Gotta love that. Sometimes I wish I had that power. I think my life would be a lot more fun if I did. He always accuses me of...oh...rambling...tmi...Anyhow. I am definitely primed and ready to go for the lemonade. Please, please...
person Catpower
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. Your writing just seems to get better and better. Not to mention more prolific - don\'t you ever sleep? No - you are probably kept awake by Severus, hahaha.

Loved the line, \"even someone as dark and unseemly as Severus deserves a chance at happiness\".
person LoveSpell
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t stop, (no pun intended) you are on a definite roll.
person TheBloodyXXX
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love this fic! Seriously, I think this could go down as being one of the best HG/SS fics ever.