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person Jamie
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bravo on the very naughty cliffhanger! I think that you have a wonderful knack for making your writing seem wickedly realistic making entire story and not just the descriptions of the sexual acts a total turn on for the reader. I enjoyed part 1 of the story and I can\'t wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the good work!
person Snapelover11
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Umm...yeah...Love the title of this chapter BTW. *giggles* So she\'s gonna do IT, huh? Oh boy...I\'m wondering what the heck is going on with ALbus and Minerva! hahahahaha
person Bobbie
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sweet crist oh mighty, i guess this is where we can say,\" DAMN GOD IS GOOD.\" ok, heart rate slowing down again. I guess we can say every womans fantisy, mind is blown, cant spell..damn your good.want more soon...........S O O N...............
person Ricochet
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Urrrghhh.Wrinkly sex ahoy!
person Stormi
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20 & 21

Wow! Need the next chapter now please!


Stormi

person redwiccan
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To your last comment...isn\'t that the god awful truth!!..his voice alone could do wonderful things... Thankyou for keeping Snape in cannon. Your story is one of the best I\'ve read and I have read a whole lot of these..too nice severus is just not a good thing..Bless you..you are doing a great job of keeping him the way I picture him in my mind..please keep up the great work!
person Koda
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
But he\'s like. 200 years old. -gigglesnorts-
person Anguloce
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i agree...i do believe i\'d say yes to just about anything he asked (or commanded;) of me...
person Sari
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! That last chapter was awesome!! and the titles!! \"For the Glory of Slytherin\" hehe...what a way to represent the best house at Hogwarts. Great work, PLEASE keep it up. Me and my roommate read this with great joy!!

~Sari
person luvssnape
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That last chapter was hilarious. Definitly not what I was expecting.