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September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well that was a brilliant little story. Sad as hell but brilliant. Don\'t suppose you\'d consider dumping Ginny off a bridge or anything. Chapter Two, \"Just Kidding! Harry Comes to His Senses and runs after Draco!\" Oh good, now I feel much better.
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September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No!!! You\'ve got to continue! Does he go through with the wedding? What happens next? Oh I\'ve gotta know! He may love her but he\'s not in love with her.
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September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH GOD!
*covers face with hands*
What a lovely, heartwrenching, angsty piece! Jesus! I can\'t breathe!! And what a song to choose for it!! *remembers music video*
You didn\'t overdo the imagery OR overdo the vocabulary. (Some authors litter their pieces with that stuff and it\'s almost as bad as the \"bad stuff.\") Also, I felt that the characterization was done so well for this story. I enjoyed Draco very much, and Harry as well. Especially after the last two lines-EVEN THOUGH IT BROKE MY GODDAMN HEART!! *sniffs* Again, this was a perfect REAL love story. Sometimes, no matter how much it hurst me to admit cause I\'m a hopeless romantic here-*inhales deeply*.... there is no happy ending.....
Thank you for sharing this amazing read. I hope to read more from you, and maybe one day something WITH a happy ending? ;]
PS: Even though, like I said- ME = hopeless romantic. I think this fic would be such an impact even on its own. Soo... I guess it\'s up to you if you want to write a sequel..... and if you DO decide *smiles brightly* I\'ll help search for that perfect song!! (I\'m not biased, really! *g*) *goes off to search for sequel song* :] x 10
*covers face with hands*
What a lovely, heartwrenching, angsty piece! Jesus! I can\'t breathe!! And what a song to choose for it!! *remembers music video*
You didn\'t overdo the imagery OR overdo the vocabulary. (Some authors litter their pieces with that stuff and it\'s almost as bad as the \"bad stuff.\") Also, I felt that the characterization was done so well for this story. I enjoyed Draco very much, and Harry as well. Especially after the last two lines-EVEN THOUGH IT BROKE MY GODDAMN HEART!! *sniffs* Again, this was a perfect REAL love story. Sometimes, no matter how much it hurst me to admit cause I\'m a hopeless romantic here-*inhales deeply*.... there is no happy ending.....
Thank you for sharing this amazing read. I hope to read more from you, and maybe one day something WITH a happy ending? ;]
PS: Even though, like I said- ME = hopeless romantic. I think this fic would be such an impact even on its own. Soo... I guess it\'s up to you if you want to write a sequel..... and if you DO decide *smiles brightly* I\'ll help search for that perfect song!! (I\'m not biased, really! *g*) *goes off to search for sequel song* :] x 10