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by Tashasaphi

person thrnbrooke
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Livid? Why? Can\'t wait for chapter 3!!!
person Lauryn
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey
that was awesome!
It seemed so realistic, and I love Gwen. What you did with that song was mighty interesting.
A really powerful story.
I really enjoyed it, it was like I was right there in the cafe watching it.
Thanks!
person BurningSilence
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AH! I need to know what happens! I absolutely cannot WAIT until chapter three!!
person Aurora
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. Your story is great so far and i can\'t waite to read more.
person Amessis
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh! Harry\'s going to get it! Nice job.
person scully
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ack! great but i HATE sad endings! go back and make it better! ditch the ginny an take the draco!
person The Author
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Here\'s me reviewing myself since no one else does (thanks to the 6 of you who did!!!)

Waaaah wahhhhh!

Sad sad sad.

But guess what- THERE\'S A SEQUEL!

It\'s on it\'s way!

Tsx
person Nightwing
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg... no happy ending?
I loved it, its was beautifully written...
Chow for now!
person Lily
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
subject: WHERE IN THE NAME OF ALL THAT IS HOLY IS MY MOCHA MUG?
i need to get out more.
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderful peice. Harry and Draco\'s characterization was done wonderfully. You stated things without overstating them, and that made the piece even better. It had a bittersweet ending though that left me feeling sad and a bit cold on the inside, but not in a bad way! Just...I like happy endings more times than not and this made me feel horrible that there wasnt one. I hope you find the song for a sequel that will hopefully have a happy ending. Harry loves Ginny, but even he, himself stated (in his thoughts) that Ginny and Cho were tom-boyish and that added to they\'re appeal for him. He loves her, he\'s just not in love with her I think. Once again hope you find a song for the sequel.