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by carpemalfoy

person Kozeta
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Maybe you cam make our dear headmaster younger... like its some kind of soul mate thing or something???
plz update soon

Hugggg from little o me :-)
person goddessanubiset
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would prefer short chapter more often. I kinda like this one. Though, I can understand how it would squick some people with the Dumbledore/Tom thing. But, really, Tom is quite old, his body may be young, but he is not. He is fifty years older than his body. Maybe a warning in the first chapter, so that those that are squicked by older men/younger men, don`t read it. That might keep some of the readers that would bash you for this, from reading it. I don`t see the problem, I mean, they are wizards, they live a lot longer than us. Who is to say that the two of them couldn`t live a long life together. Besides, there has to be deaging potions that Albus could take, if he truly wanted to. I don`t see why he would, he is a hotty, for an old guy. Then again, I thought Gandolf, from the LOTR, was a hotty for an old guy. I think, S. Connery is hot too. And, he could be my grandfather. Who cares. Well, obviously, some do. But those, hopefully, willl be few and far between. I mean, Lucius is old enough to be Harry`s father and not many slash lovers have a problem with that. Some are just pains. Don`t let them stop you. I happen to like this. I was a little shocked, by them being soul mates, but oh well. I do wonder how Grindenwald (yes, this is the spelling), got a hold of Tom. I also wonder, why it was just Tom, or if there was another. I mean, if Griny was so good, he should have realized that he would need more than one. Maybe, he was able to keep that from Tom. Wouldn`t have been to hard. After all, Tom said he couldn`t really read all of old Grindy`s mind.

Goddess Anubiset
person Missi
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yep, despite my inability to get on recently, I STILL love this fic and can\'t (but will) wait for more.
person Tamura
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was most unexpected. Albus and riddle as soulmates, let alone the fact that voldemort wasn\'t riddle but grindelwald in riddle\'s body... the plot twist. and that cliffhanger. i wanna know what happens next. and whether Luc and harry are gonna get married or already are and other relevant stuff like that.
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What happens in chapter 4?
person Drey Towson
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, you shouldn\'t leave it there. This story is pretty good and you really should add more to it or at least add a sequel to it. As for a title, I\'m not really good at titles. LOL
person Narcissa Black
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you look up the word squick in the dictionary, I am sure that it is defined as sex with Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore. Plus I read a very good fic a while back that had Dumbledore raping Hermione and taking her virginity, but he was so old, he needed a spell to get it up. Some images just stay with you.
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t care when you update just update and write a CH with Dumblroe screwing a virgin Tom Riddle! I love having a sick mind. Please make me happy! ^_^
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOW CUTE! Will you write a sex part to Dumblore and Tom? I would love to see Dumblore screwing Tom! Yes I have a sick mind. But come on I have this fic to my favs! PRETTY PLEASE!!!
person Narcissa Black
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is very original thinking, very good. Tom does sound like a hottie. Oh no, does this mean there will be Dumbledore sex? I sure hope not. Yech.