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for My Father\'s Eyes

by 8inchCaliper

person Becca
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was oh so dirty and disgusting and yet....utterly HOT and delicious. I shouldn\'t love it, but I do. daaaaaaaamn. *pants and fans herself*
twisted ;-) yum!
person MistressofDisaster
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Disturbing but defenitly hot!
Good Story keep writing!
MD
person Chiaki Dark
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So... the line between love and hate is rather thin. Or is the line merely an illusion we use to soothe our minds with when the longing of our hearts is too \"crazy\" to be true and right according to what our society\'s taught us? ;]

Oh hell! You just made my weekend. That was a fantastic, hot, dark, passionate read! And even though I read the warnings, have/had no problem whatsoever with reading incest fics, knew this was a NC-17.... when Harry called Severus \"Daddy\" for the first time I nearly died from erotic overload!! It was FANTASTIC!! *claps hands together* As a little note-I liked how Severus didn\'t SAY he loved his son *grins lewdly at referring to Harry as Sev\'s SON* but rather SHOWED him. That was nice. I really liked that. I really liked this fic.

I\'m SO going to hell-but at least I\'ll have company! ;]

More please!!!!! :]
person kaji11
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent.
person antipyro
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve never read incest before but that was incredibly HOT!

At first I wasn\'t sure how you were going to achieve this miracle of Harry hating Severus, then loving him.

Very, very good and well done!

Loved it.

Thank you ever so much.
person MadEye in da hizouse!
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, honey. That was so sweet. I kinda wanna cry just a little bit. As soon as Harry\'s lips touched Severus\'s forehead, I got chills. And the sex - oh, god. It\'s total hotness and sweetness, and the sweetness just intensifies the hotness. And there was a really nice progression from \"I hate you, please die now\" to \"Um ... wow. You\'re kinda hot.\" Nicely paced. Me likey.

Oy. I need a cold shower now, dude.
person Katie K
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so good! Sad, yet hot! I love it!
person Vulcran
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!*faints* I\'m okay, really I am..... that is so WRONG but SO RIGHT! ^_~ AHHH it was great. I so happy. Usually I don\'t like the incest fics but this was good. HUZZAH!*gives chocolates* write another, pweaze?*puppy eyes*
person cath
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well written, but disturbing.
person Laurel Runes
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blinks a moment* ..wow... That was really good. Different take on it. Normally Harry and Sev are already together and then they find out the truth and uh-oh but not with this one. Different in a good way...well, not good per say...very \'bad\' actually but...very, very bad. ^_~ Either way, it was a excellently written tale. Great job!