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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, this COULD turn into a good story, maybe, and you write fine. BUT VERNON AND FLITWICK!!!!!?????? EWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!! And DUDLEY AND AUNT PETUNIA!?!?!?!?!?! AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! Gods, at least throw some Harry/Hermione/Draco action in here!
Love,
Us
Love,
Us
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I laughed at how you described what Professor Flitwick was doing to Vernon.
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What the hell did Flitwick ever do to you that you would treat him so abysmally? I agree with Harry- projective vomiting is in order! Don\'t tell me the other two were necked also because Voldemort wanted some fat boy...
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A nice blend of big words and vomit-worthy images. Can\'t wait for chapter 2.