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for Incurably Criminal

by roxierose13

person Hambares
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have to write at leats one more chapter! Please!
person Sloane
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. Maybe there could be this guy who wants to get between them, who is crazy about Draco or Harry and wants him for himself. (Not Ron). Maybe they could play some mischief at that school, do something horrible to some teacher or something. Let your fantasy flow.
person thrnbrooke
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More!!! Need chapter 9!!! Does Harry ever get out of there? Draco? Do they stay together? Does Draco find out who Sirius is? Does Harry meet Draco\'s parents? Sooo many questions for their future! And what about Draco\'s other lovers? Does Harry meet Blaise? And Draco all of Harry\'s friends?
person Jessica
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
M-azing! I loved it so much! keep up the brilliant work! ^-^
person moi
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
continue! you have to! i really really wana know what happens next! great chapter, by the way.
-moi
person venus
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
noooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u mustn\'t end this! it could go soooo much farther!! u could have one of them taken from the school! or have one of them raped or something! (don\'t ask y i\'m so into having rape included in stories, i just am) or! or or or! u could have one of them fuck with someone else while drunk, and the other walk in, and then the dude who fucked can not remember what happened, and omg u could branch out sooooooooooooooo far! u have no idea how many ideas have popped into my head in the last 3 seconds! its gotta be a record! (unfortuneately my fucking pc won\'t let me log on as an author, again, so i can\'t really take these ideas anywhere right no :( i wanna write sooooooooo bad!!!!! i\'ve already started 5 new fics on word, expect them in the coming months from me, if i can log on that is)
person Aurora
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and i hope you continue it. hmmm...maybe you could continue with Harry finding out about Draco\'s parents and vice versa and then see where the story progresses from there. Maybe Draco introducing them or something? Anyways i\'m sure that whatever you do will be great.Lots of luck!
Can\'t waite to read more.
person Mare
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You COULD end it now, but it would kinda be a weak ending. I can\'t think of anything off the top of my head, but maybe some kind of obsticle to throw in there would be good before an ending... Just a thought. Good job though!
person Anon
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that if you can\'t think of anything else that this story needs, then you should let it end right here rather than force out something just for the sake of more. It\'s not as if this chapter ends in a cliff hanger or anything so it\'s a good spot to leave it at.
person nextvictim
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nono nononononononononononoonoononono!!!!!

this BETTER not be the endd....

NOOOOOOO