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for Mockingbird

by ChaosgoddessKali

person TyRisha
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. poppy\'s mad, really mad. dumbledore\'s gonna get it now. or, rather, later. wait, wait, wait. son? Harry\'s the son of Snape. hmmm. *strokes chin* interesting, this should be good. i like the title of the story too. are the poems at the beginning yours? cause they\'re good.
person Pepp
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Cries* Nooo!!! I hate the evil cliffies!! Why oh why? Oh, i loved (hated) the chapter [evil Dumbledore must DIE!!!!!!!!!] ANd I cant wait till the next chapter! I lie those little poem thingys at the top of the pages... And i hope that Dumbledore is killed!! **grrrr!!!!!!!***


EVIL! He\'s EVIL!!!! the damned old badger deserves DEATH for mistreating poor Harry! And i love the twist of Harry and Snape being father/son! ^^
person Pepp
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Cries* Nooo!!! I hate the evil cliffies!! Why oh why? Oh, i loved (hated) the chapter [evil Dumbledore must DIE!!!!!!!!!] ANd I cant wait till the next chapter! I lie those little poem thingys at the top of the pages... And i hope that Dumbledore is killed!! **grrrr!!!!!!!***


EVIL! He\'s EVIL!!!! the damned old badger deserves DEATH for mistreating poor Harry! And i love the twist of Harry and Snape being father/son! ^^
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating this story.
I\'m glad Poppy is on Harry\'s side of moral support.
Will Severus listen to her of protecting Harry and the baby?
Please update again as soon as you possibly can.
person penny
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still needs proper paragraphs.
person Serenity
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update yes I know school started but update!!!!!!!!!!
person chi no hana
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.o omg, what have you done? i mean, this story has got me hooked with the summary, so i really want (need) to read the update!
person tessa3
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O OH HELLLLLLL NOOOOOOOOO!!! *goes ghetto on Dumbledore\'s nasty ass* oh that was just WRONG!!!! *glares at Albus* ya know.. i truly hope he get\'s his ass kick.. so whens the next chapter being put out??? hmmm.. im waiting *wiggles eyebrows* i seriously like to see where this is going*nodding8
person Storm
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I like it so far. I can\'t wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work.
person TyRisha
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ha! i always knew that dumbledore was evil! long live voldemortxharry fics.... mwahahahha. no really though, it was a very good beginning. keep going please!