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for Mockingbird

by ChaosgoddessKali

person fragonknight01
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was one creepy chapter! I am totally cringing about Dumbledore...you have made one sick homeboy there!
person TyRisha
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that\'s dark - really, really dark. whoever made you feel that way is a bad, mean, evil person. with no heart! it\'s disturbing too, since i\'ve felt that way after something happened too. if the love of your life made you feel that way, said person doesn\'t deserve your love
person TyRisha
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please write more soon. i really really like this story, Snape makes such a good daddy! and that poem was beautiful
person Storm
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Severus crying? I just want to hold and comfort him and ...bad mind bad! anyway back to unnaughty thoughts. Sorry lots of caffeine and sugar. Anyway, I am so glad that Talon wants to work things out with Severus. And I can\'t wait til Dumbledore gets his just rewards. I hope Talon castrates HIM with a dul knife very slowly and then feeds him his own genatalia. plus so much other torture. Anyway, can\'t wait for the next chapter. Great job
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great update to the story sweetie!!!!
I loved reading!!!!!!
Um, question!!!!
There\'s going to be Harry/Lucius/Tom (Voldemort) Slash right?
^-^
Wonderful new chapter.
Please update again asap please.
You\'re loved!!!!!!!!!!
person Missi
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was amazing!! Thank you so much for writing it-I can\'t wait for more!!
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to hear your\'e feeling bad.But a moving poem nonetheless. Funny how we can sometimes write best when we feel at our worst...
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful!!!!!!!!
person as
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Faren Teser Snape
person Pimpshit
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I VOTE THE FAREN TESER!!