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hi... this could be such a good story if you kept going... and slowed down and didnt rush certain plot points of the story... please please update soon... oh and apart from A/N's there shouldnt be anything non related to the story and AN generally should be delted after they are no longer applicable... thats what sites like livejournal are for... your own personal postings... :D update~

I truely enjoy your story . I however would ditch the poems no one really reads them I scroll past them thinking that could have been time devoted to the story having let you know the what I did not care for now comes the I really like . I like how Harry is not a potter at all and of course im all for Dumbledore bashing . Have fun writing and no more poems please tons of hugs.

Hi,
I really like this, it's got a good plot line. It's written quite well even if the present tense pisses me off-but that's just a personal preference... Anyway, is it possible for you to email me when you update? It's just that i don't get on the net much and i really want to continue reading this.

Thanks!!!
Emily

Awesome story! Will you update soon? If you do can you tell me by e-mailing me at veelagirle@yahoo.com.

THIS IS MY FIRST TIME READING THIS AND I LIKE IT CAN NOT WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!!!
CAN YOU SEND ME UPDATES? AT poohnation74@yahoo.com thank you !

Good chapter.

Good chapter.

Loving the story so far. Please keep updating and let me know when the new chap is up.

I have some things to say to you, first of all, I see it was first uploaded almost three years ago, and you haven't finished it yet :( Bad bad bad, especially since I'm starting to read it, if you can't finish it then I'll be so angry, really like this story, sometimes it's written in a poor way(I don't mean it in a mean way) I don't know if it's because it goes quickly sometimes or if you jump a lot. This is Creative Comment so don't take it a bad way because the story has a great line through it, love how you managed to make Snape his father, and Dumbledore evil, I knew it.

Keep up the good work, love the poems by the way.

Poems wonderful---but---please longer and quicker chapters also. It would be Ok to submit some chapters with out the poem and some with only the poem, if that would help produce more legnth and speed.