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by cruttan

person Pastel
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. It\'s great. Update soon please
person Joyous
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the \"He was absolutely not going.... Sitting in the chair at Potter\'s..\" LOL Priceless!!! I cracked up... I love your writing style, can\'t wait to read more... Hermione is adorable in this story. Cheers!
person firewall
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is different from most of the stories I read but I am absolutely loving it. Update soon.
person Cappuccino
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Going great! Those scenes were pretty steamy!
person Anon
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story. please keep updating!
person Kel
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start! I hope you update soon. :)
person michelle
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far. How tall is hermione? 5\'1- 5\'2- 5\'3? It will be cute if she was 5\'2 at least or. I think she would look adorable, not to mention a sexy minx. wild ,golden brown curls, like the woman from van helsing? or something like that. love that hair, short filled frame, pouty lips, golden eyes, alomond eyes(like jasmin from aladdin?) lol. that\'s my description, i\'m not lesbian. I just though since she\'s a from the golden trio, why not give her a golden name: golden girl. lol. love this chapter. I love draco\'s description, also. How tall is he over 6 feeto or just 6 feet. I like 6\'2. lol. it\'s my opinion. hope u update soon. keep up the good work. ^-^\'
person Sommer
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story.
Can\'t wait to read more
person Michelle
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh *falls of chair* this chapter was good, damn good. I liked the pet name \"sweetheart\". Draco sounded older, I loved it, it shows he has grown over the years. Hope to hear from you, soon. update soon.
person firewall
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, this is turning out to be a very sweet story. Nicely done and I\'m looking forward to your next chapter.