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by cruttan

person Michelle
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOT *does the happy dance* I love chapter seven. *grins* I wouldn\'t mind seducing, draco, if he was real. lol. update soon,if, you have time. this is one of the sexiest stories i\'ve ever read in my teen years. I love it. i\'ll never get tired of it.




The same michelle.lol. ^-^\'
person Narcissa Black
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good Lord, he\'s awesome. Can\'t you send this out as some sort of training manual for muggles? I have a few people who would definitely be better off for having read it.
person ancientgirl
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. I\'m looking forward to how Hermione will seduce Draco, seeing as I don\'t think she\'s got to try very hard.
person ancientgirl
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL, you are doing a heck of a lot better at restraining them than I would. I\'m enjoying the fact, however that they are taking their time. He did treat her badly during their time in school, so I understand they need to take their time to deal with their new found comfort level.

I\'m looking forward to the next chapter.
person Michelle
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think your story is the sweetest i\'ve ever read *SIGHTS DREAMLY*. I love this gorgeous, DRACO, so much. He sounds bloody hot, sexy, caring, beautiful and the list can go on and on. I don\'t know what to say about your story. There\'s lots of thing, good thing, I love about it. They sound mature, no school names, bad names I mean. They sound like they\'re a couple, having fun. I LOVE IT. I also like this, Harry, but, not Ron. I hope you update soon.I love the pet names so much, so, PLEASE, keep writing pet names. They sound as if, Draco is talking to his wife, HERMIONE. YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY. I hope they get married in this fiction, and at the end a blond little baby, a little boy, who looks like a mini Draco. PLEASE, I KNOW LOTS OF PEOPLE DON\'T LIKE BABIES SOMETIMES, BUT I ENJOY THEM, I THINK IT SOUND LOVELY. PLEASE. JUST A REQUEST. LOL. *GRINS*
person Michelle
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have one question. Can you answer it for me? Is Pansy (pug face) showing in this story? Please answer my question. it\'s been killing me? lol. Is someone new or old, show on this story, trying to break them apart , when they are more attached together? just a yes or no is good. please. love your story. I will never get tired of saying it. Your a wonder writer. *grins* I hope you write more HR/D STORIES IN THE FUTURE. THEY WOULD ROCK.
person Joyous
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter... it shows that you can have a good time without really doing anything... Those were always my favorite times in my past relationships, just sitting there with each other. I must say though, i hope Draco get\'s a stronger personality as the story progresses. Not that he doesn\'t have one, I just like it a little stronger... but perheaps your saving that for when the lovely couple finally... well, couple. :-) I\'m still Loving Hermione though, she\'s just adorable, I want to cuddle with her. lol
person HiddenAllusion
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely! I\'m really glad I found this. I like the pace and your characterisation of Draco and... well, everything. Thank you!
person Katie
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg. I just read all of this and wow. I love this story. Very well written and going at a nice pace. Love it!
person carabella
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is soooo sweet, and at the same time, you can still see the intimidatingly sexy bad-boy draco that appeals to every woman. i thought it was really cute when he meekly dropped the subject of food with one hermione-style look and him with his hair on fire is just hilarious. great job and keep it going....: )