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for Second Chances

by cruttan

person Narcissa Black
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When I was still in school, I worked at Victoria\'s Secret at Christmas. One day this incredibly hot, sweet, rather embarrassed man came in looking for a gift for his wife. He confessed that she didn\'t really have any sexy nightgowns, that she usually slept in one of his t-shirts. DUH! I\'m sure Draco would be suave in any store, but for some reason, this chapter evoked that image for me. You\'ve got quite some love story going here.
person ancientgirl
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, fantastic chapter. I love the nightgown you described, sounds very pretty. I\'m looking forward to more of this story.
person Petalsoft
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that was nice. I loved the build up of Hermione getting ready for the big night and then being so nervous about it. Then Draco\'s reaction when he saw her in her sexy lingerie. Nicely done.
person Cappuccino
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a well written story. I am glad that you waited for them to come together. It made it so much more delicious. It is great to see the gentle Draco that cares for others pleasure rather than his own. It\'s endearing. Keep up the great work.
person moxie
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! VERY sexy as well as romantic!
person Petalsoft
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Loving this romance lots. Keep it up!
person Melinda
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved Second Chances. It rocked.
person Michelle
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I forget to metion, I tend to write more than two reviews at the same time. DON\'T PUT ANY PANSY OR OC CHARACTERS, PLEASE. I LOVE YOUR STORY. IT\'S, SO. ROMANTIC. I LOVE DRACO\'S COOING WORDS, THEY DRIVE US OVER THE EDGE, WELL, THEY DO TO ME. I ALSO LOVE THE PET NAME:LOVE. KIND OF CORNY, BUT I SHOWS, THAT YOU CARE FOR THAT PERSON. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK, UPDATE SOON, PLEASE. THIS IS THE ONE OF MY FAVE STORIES, ALREADY. ^-^
person Narcissa Black
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Explain to me how it\'s possible that he hasn\'t had her yet. I know he\'s trying to show her he cares about her, but enough is enough. I guarantee I would have convinced him that I would respect him in the morning. And in the afternoon, before dinner, at dinner, over coffee....
person Truth44
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What can I say? It was beautiful. It was all romantic and stuff, which you don\'t really see for Draco and Hermione. I liked it, a lot, and I can\'t wait until Hermione seduces him.

Update soon!
Truth