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for Alone

by roxierose13

person Anon
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa, keep going! u are such a good author!
*YAY*
person Kcrae
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sits and stares open mouthed at computer screen*...I fucking love it!!!
person Anon
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg i want another chapter! pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease(do i havta keep going???)
person wanda
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg i loved it!! please write more!! i\'ll love you forever and ever
person Mare
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is there going to be more?!
person Mercika
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story. You have a real gift for writing ... keep it up.
~ Mercika
person garraffen
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwww...................... i feel every single emotion inside the story............... i *almost* hated draco................. this is really good, can\'t wait for another one (rubs hands greedily)
person fragonknight01
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a haunting bit of sadness and yet so human. I think you caught a bit of real life masquerading as art.
person ura
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this was real nice
person ura
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like you style. All these repeated over and over again little sentences makes it possible to feel Harry\'s and Draco\'s pain.

I think you need at least one more chapter to create a closure.