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for Alone

by roxierose13

person Drake
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! this is soooo sad!!! please write chapter 4 soon!!! please!!!! im dieing to know what happens!
person wanda
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLESASE I BED OF YOU!! WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *puppy dog eyes*
person aimee
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
stupid draco ! how i hope there's more than just "hallo harry" even if harry's expectations are so low that would be enaugh (ha !) for him.
person aimee
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please write another chapter: bring the first two together, bring harry and draco together !
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was simply awesome darling. It was so incredibly moving and powerful

sorry i have been out of touch lately, but RL has me hidden under my bed.
person hpfan
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! you must show me!! hehe
person hp_reader
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Read the first chapter and got caught - then read the 2nd - it actually brought tears to my eyes! I've never had one of these do that before.
person Philomel
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully intense. The repetitions of his small wishes depict his brokenness, the emptiness inside. Sad that Ron and Hermione don\'t understand it.
It\'s good that you haven\'t left it as a one shot, the end is too promising.
person Philomel
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Perfect following chapter. It\'s good to see the things from Draco\'s POV, his feeble attempts of remaining whole. You kept the same style, the repetitions of the main aim.
Two broken orphans. Is there a possibilty of them healing each other?
person Anon
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i don\'t even know what to say