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for Come Dowsed in Mud

by Tarie

person spock74
schedule March 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Hot!
person Briar (not signed in)
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow I think I love you could you write twenty updates to that? I'd be really happy! Well I guess I can live with just the one for now but you have to update soon!
person mona
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
we love this so update!!! :)
person Nem
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I say. Wow!
You\'ve portrayed the encounter with a --- a stroke of genius. I can\'t say enough to give you an idea of how marvellous your portrayal is. It sounded so like--- like Malfoy... and Hermione. Psychologically on the spot. And with humour, too. Lovely, just lovely!
And it works perfect as a one-shot. If you continue, I\'m not sure if it could match this... :)
And the style and register is so *fucking* Malfoy that it\'s amazing...
person mistress meo
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Deliciously wicked and yummy. Please continue. Your writing style is fantastic.
person lilycat
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story. I love Draco\'s inner monologue throughout- especially after all is said and done and he\'s thinking about not giving in to this without a fight. It makes the whole thing so combustible and so HOT.

Love this piece!

Catherine
person Anon
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, hot. :) Loved it!
person flynn
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm...steamy AND intriguing. maybe a bit ooc, but as we\'ve never seen either in anything close to a sexual situation (DAMMIT!), perfectly acceptable and enjoyable.

i do hope you continue this plot. i look forward to more slytherin cunning...or cuming....^_^

lucky charms,
flynn
person elektrik_storm
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fantastically written! i hope there is more! another chapter or 10, or is this just a one shot? :(

E_S
person moxie
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! VERY naughty. I hope this wasn\'t a one-off like, I noticed, many of your other stories. It\'s quiet interesting and I would LOVE to read more. A little confusion though. The classification says its M/M (I prefer M/F) but there wasn\'t anything but het. Maybe it\'ll change in the subsequent chapters...? Love it, please continue (and I also request a continuation in the D/Hr ship.