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v good. Update please! more draco. i love that sexy bad boy!

hey, your story has an interesting theme of some sort, but it isnt that great. you have to learn to put more descriptions in your paragraphs so that the make more sense. and dont be puting exclamation marks where they arent necesarry, that just makes people think that they are yelling at someone. and dont make the characters and what they are saying sound so irrelevant. and another thing, i think that this story doesnt belong here at this site in particular, think that this story would go better on fanfiction . net, i think that you might get more reviews, but i think that you need a beta to check this story, cause seriously you need some tips on how to write. unless this story has no smut, you will get no reviews at all, no smut, no attention, i just want to make that clear.

dont tell me to go to hell, or insult me or anything, cause all im doing is just giving you some friendly advice, take it or leave it.

that was really bad. bad writing and the plot is stupid.

A new chapter will come soon!
Hope you guys like it...
It\'s my first so be nice!

awesome start!! i love it. keep it up. (btw... voldie.. turn good?? wtf??)