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January 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OH! So erotic!
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice. as always inell, you fic was a beautiful piece. i do hope you continue this story. it was just so full of promise and everything worked so nice in conjuction with each other.
however the moment that was the most powerful for me was:
however the moment that was the most powerful for me was:
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO!!! There should of been much more sex between those two! You were cruel to stop the story there ... unless you make a second chapter (Please?).
~ Mercika
~ Mercika
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yet again I love your work. This was really well written and such a cool story! thanks
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice. keep updating new, one shots.
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful to see another story by my favorite author! Well done, as usual, with adult characterizations and visually enjoyable plot settings. Cheers!
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was absolutley fantastic! I really did enjoy it. My only complaint is that its just too good to be a one shot, id love to see where you would take further chapters and would definately read on if you decided to add more, but if you want to keep it as a one shot then its your chocie, but I for one wouldnt complain at seeing further chapters! Well done, you are a very talented author! xx
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOO Please not the end that was awsome you so have to write this out!
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no, no, no dont let it end this is a great story! what happens afterwoods?
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG Please Please Continue. This is one of the only HBP fics that I love. Its\' so good, its almost like your JK herself. Wowzers