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Nice job on this-mysteies are allaround it seems.

Very slow moving and hard to understand. Think I will hit the back button and find something else my head might be able to figure out.

I enjoyed this chapter, I like the way you\'re going with this. So did Harry really hear that question? I now that Hermione wanted Ron to tell Harry that they are dating. Now what was Ron going to say about draco? He was staying stuff alost sticking up for him. I wish Harry wouldn\'t have such a temper, it doesn\'t become him. So far I haven\'t seen any spelling mistakes or grammar, so if you ever need someone to edit your work before putting it on here, I\'d be honoured. This is an amazing story, superb chapter. Now what do you get when ice melts? Well water, if this is associated with Draco that would mean the ice around his heart has melted? Or the mask he has been portraying has melted? Please continue and Email me on the next update. So update as soon as possibal. Have you ever thought of putting this on fanfiction?

Peace out,
Founderschild
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Is the Ron and Draco thing, Ron feeling what Draco is feeling? Maybe Draco\'s subconcious is telling Ron, talking through him? I am really liking this story, again could you email me again for update. hope to hear from you soon.
Peace out,
founderschild

Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 4! Draco has a lot to think about now. Heheheh. Poor Ron. Too bad!

Your writing was magnificent! I am being completely honest, so please write more^_^

Interesting start to this = I\'m looking forward to where you\'re taking this. Especially since you have my 2 fav boys in it together. =)

This was very interesting, I enjoyed it very much, Please do continue and update. Can you emasil me when you update. I want to see how this turns out, good luck to you
peace out
founderschild
xxx

intersting start. what does snow melting have to do with anything i wonder? keep it going!

What did Ron see? What did Draco do? Why did Severus shiver at the thought of Lily\'s eyes. Vengeful eyes he called them. Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 2!