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for When Snow Melts

by TriSanctum

person inu-chan puppy (too lazy to sign in)
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was simply brilliant. i like the way the story is progressing. Especially now that they have..um...*cough cough*... had coupled...*cough*. please do hurry with the next chapter.
person watergod
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was bloody brilliant!!!! damn now i can\'t till you update. //sits in front of the computer staring at the screen// i know it won\'t work but still....
person Founders
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god AMAZING SEX SCENE! Draco is such a bastard. Did i miss something? I don\'t remember the first sex scene? I\'m quite confused. Email me on next update, oh and I\'ve updated I want you bad
peace out,
Founderschild
xxxxx
person thrnbrooke
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Harry knows the answer. So why didn\'t Draco want to hear it? Afraid he was giving up his mate and child? What happens when Hermione goes to Dumbledore? Severus knows what Draco is doing? Truly? I can\'t wait for chapter 7!
person Amessis
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You did really well on this- even the sex part. The hard part is knowing that Harry is under a potion for all of this to happen.
person founders
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If Draco hates him then why does he get Harry to make it and drink it? I\'m confused but this is very good. I don\'t get it. Can you explain this chapter to me in an email? Email me for next chap

peace out
Founderschild
xxxx
person thrnbrooke
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love potions are illegal! Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 6!
person watergod
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
quite fascinating, please do continue!
person thrnbrooke
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why is the question in the potions book? Why did Draco ask it? Why does it seem familiar to Harry? Need chapter 3 please!
person leviathan06
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This sentence \'When snow melts, what does it become?\' reminds me a lot of fruits basket. Its when Hatori asks that to Tohru. If you have seen the anime or read the manga then you know what I\'m talking about if not...oh well

Anywho like the story so far. I just love Harry/Draco stories can\'t get enough of \'em. Hope you do continue with this story.