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for When Snow Melts

by TriSanctum

schedule March 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Sandra Smith
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
there is nothing more annoying than an author that takes half a page to thank people who reviewed or takes most of a page to give explanations. Those kinds of things SHOULD NOT appear in your fic. If you wanna thank your reviewers, send out emails. I f you wanna take 3/4 of a page for explainations, make it a chapter for authors notes...I mean jeeeeeez, are you trying to write or run a popularity contest. This is getting ridiculous. This chapter in particular, who knows if it was a decent chapter. you took maybe 1/4 page to give your summary and thank reviewers, 1/4 page for the actual chapter and the rest for explanations. Are you trying to attract intelligent readers or school age children? Get a clue
person strangedude
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
//Glares and taps foot// I
person aloveablegimp
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have a question. I know you said that you started chapter nine already but i wanted to make sure that you are going to continue the story. Can you throw up a quick authors note letting us know if you are going to continue this story? ^_^ thanks a million.
Cheers!
Kates
person aloveablegimp
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOO!!! EVIL CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!! Please update!!! I love your story, please please update!
person elecktra107
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Great job! Update soon!!
person founders
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey sorry, just got your email, college has been hectic so how are you doing? Good chapter, the sex scene was great. You have written it very well. So Draco found out Harry was in his own state of mind. I bet he will blackmail harry hmmm? Harry didn\'t do anything wrong though did he? Once again email me on update.

peace out,
Founderschild
Xxx
person thrnbrooke
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Harry won\'t be getting his answers now. What happens in chapter 9!
person cara
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loooooooooove this fic every new chap always surprises me
person Sarah
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As Hatori would say, \"Water, of course.\"
But Kana and Tohru would say, \"Spring!\"
Haha! Fruits Basket was the first anime I ever saw. It is my favorite!