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for Sisters of the Dark Moon

by TCardan

person firewall
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The conflicting emotions were nice and tight in this chapter. I just hope the girls don\'t lose the edge they had and start to cave. They need to be brash and assertive. Go for it Ladies.
person dragon34
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. Can\'t wait for more chapters.
person jada
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hope u continue it
person firewall
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your title drew me in and I\'m glad that I read your first chapter. I agree with you re rape and there will be some people who take offense at your story but they have the choice of not reading it. I also am interested in seeing how you deal with the whole issue. Thanks for sharing; I\'ll look forward to your next chapter.
person firewall
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just went through to check out the other reviews and the other reviewers brought up a very good point...with the exception of Draco, the other boys did indicate their willingness. I hadn\'t noticed that.
person shawna
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!! I have been waiting for a new chapter of What a witch wants to be posted and saw this story and figured if it was near as good as your other stories that I would love it and I was right. I can\'t wait for more chapters. :)
person jez
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You HAVE TO continue this fic it is awesome... please let us know how the guys get their revenge and please also to tell us what happened that night. This is a great and really original idea, in all the years I\'ve been reading fanfic I don\'t think I\'ve come across this idea before (if i have then it was poorly written because I don\'t remember it). PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue it.
person rubberduck
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
while having hermione do the imperius curse on the boys and the secrecy of the coven is a bit dark, i thought this was pretty darn funny. well draco being the only one who feels violated and all. he\'s the only one that got \'raped\' as it were. the rest welcomed it. this story looks like it will be very very good, but i hope you give harry and ron some time in it too. give draco his due, but make him share or something hehe.
person Blondon
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want more!!! and I want those flashbaks to be kinky hardcore ones^^
person the infamous JMarie
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was fucing AWESOME!! I really hope you plan on updating. I can\'t wait to see where this is going to wind up!