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for Sisters of the Dark Moon

by TCardan

person Jennifer
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love how all the girls are so sure of themselves in this story - i hate the stories where all the girls have to be afraid of the boys - that\'s so retro - keep up the excellent work
person Lily
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really good, LOL, Syltherin snakes?? LOL
person Lily
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter more than the other one. keep it up
person Yoshima
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHHH shit ROTLMFAO poor Draco lol. He\'s soooo dead
person Anon
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"A/N Oh what tangled webs we weave when first we LEARN to decive.\"
person AndyD
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn you stop teasing us! Poor Harry and Ron. Very good as usual, I just wished they had given Hermione a good going over.
person Mylo
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi petalsoft!
I\'m practically a regligious follower of \"what a witch needs\", and I read this fic when it was only one chapter long, and it didn\'t really impress me that much, but I came back... you have me hooked!
Not only are you extremely creative with your stories, but you have a such a good writing style, and sense of the characters! I\'m a fan of Malfoy so I would have voted him to win the cunnilingus comp, but it\'s just as cute to see him upset losing!
Anyway, at the moment I\'m off to see the rest of your stories, becuase you are such an extremely awesome author, I can\'t read anybody else\'s works anymore :P

You truly have a gift... Think of some original stuff and get it published mate!
person cruttan
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know who to feel worse for here. As alway, I love Draco (almost) unconditionally, and he seems to be struggling to deal with all of this (understandably so, I\'d say). Seems that he may unwillingly be developing emotions about the situation, plus he now has a couple of extremely hostile wizards after him. And speaking of Harry and Ron- those poor boys! Hermione\'s ruthlessness knows no bounds! Those poor boys- their first experience with sex, and they get knocked out partway through only to get caught with each other.

Seriously, it\'s brilliantly written with Hermione as the puppetmaster. Her intentions may not be evil, but she certainly has a way of stirring up trouble for these boys. I am SO excited to see where you take all of this!
person biz
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i read and loved \"needs\" and i love this fic so far, keep the updates coming for both!
person Sorceress14
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was absolutely hilarious! Now Harry and Ron probably think that Draco molested them! LOL! And Hagrid too?!! I can\'t get over this! It just makes me want to laugh all day :D I can\'t wait to find out what Draco does when he finds out what Harry and Ron think. And hopefully, he\'ll want to get a little revenge on Hermione. Bondage, anyone? Please update soon, I can\'t wait!