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for Sisters of the Dark Moon

by TCardan

person elektrik_storm
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon! i am glad that she is getting her comuppance! i am sure it will be fun!
person applepie386
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you need to continue this story it\'s hot so hot hurry please i\'ll check every day
person Sorceress14
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you finally updated! Oooh, this could be fun! Whatever will Draco decide to do to Hermione? Have all the Slytherins do the same thing to her and the other Gryffs while ties up maybe? Oh, this could go in sooooo many kinky directions. . . Anyway, another brilliant chapter from the infamous Petalsoft and I go to sit in my corner, not so patiently to wait for more of the Gryffindor on Slytherin goodness. . . in other words, update soon!
person D.C
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like the story....and im dying to know what happens next.. please post the next chapter as soon as possible.. thnxss...plus ur doing a great job..keep it up!
person Marchatorium
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please, do not hesitate and _UPDATE!!!!!
^_____^
person Cyn
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story.....it\'s shows tha more kinkier side of the most innoence girls of Gryffindor........must update soon....can\'t wait for the next chappie...forever your reader....-Cyn
person jess
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
brilliant! make it darker please! i hope the slytherin boys finally get to have their way with the naughty gryffindor girls! plz update soon!
person LaLa
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, that was briliant. I was LMAO by the end. Malfoy indeed. Continue soon with more gangbamgs. And for everyone who think that this isn\'t ethical, than you should go read a bible and not hang around here!

You ROCK!!!
person MArchatorium
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOu have a gorgeous and dirty style. ^_^update soon, your PWPs are sooooo goood!

person Boilingseas
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, this is a well-written fic. I have a few problems, though. First, the Imperius should have removed the independent thoughts of the Slytherins. There shouldn\'t have been any bargaining. Second, it seems the obliviate wasn\'t done quite right. A first try for Hermione on both spells?
I think Hermione should owe both Harry and Ron something spectacular for the situation they ended up in. Being caught naked in Hagrid\'s hut by both Draco and Hagrid...