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for Sisters of the Dark Moon

by TCardan

person LaLa
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! HOT! HOT! HOT!
Update soon. CAn't wait for more!!!
person TheAngelOfSilence
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES!!!!Thanks for the update, I am absolutely loving this story, with your wonderful writing, every new chapter is a treat!
Fantastic!
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is awesome! I only read your two first chapters so far, but I'll be back for more later on.

I love the fact that for once the girls are in charge, and that they are free and sexially liberated. And I loved what they did to the guys in the forest. (Thought the Crabbe and Goyle scene was hilarious!)

You've made Zabini really sexy and sort of appealing.

I'm looking forward to seeing where this is heading.
person moonwaves15
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey kep ging with this fic I really like it. Your a really good writer.
person emily
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the best book ever...i loved every second of it..i want you too email me when you make a new chapter because i love it...
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bloody amazing chapter!!!!!!
person Petalsoft
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to cover all the bases when it comes to the warnings. Everyone interprets things differently, and if I didn't put the warnings, there would be some people who would say that I should have warned them. In my personal view this story's nonconsensual times are very borderline, because you can argue that the other person really did want it, even if it didn't start out that way. But to some other people, they would say it's rape, plain and simple. So I have to put the warnings so that I don't ruffle anyone's feathers - whether I agree with them or not. I had a fiction where someone tore into me for not putting the proper warnings, even though the action was only implied and not even written about yet. So, warnings are just a precaution against surprising people that were expecting something else.
person Nicole
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This fic rocks!

Keep up the good work
person cheeze
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, but is malfoy going to act all fluffy now?
person Ryu-chan
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You call that violent? Please don't worry cos I can ussure you its nothing near to what some other people have written.If you ever chance to read any( or most anyway) Harry/Voldemort storys you'll find out about some real violence. Anyway, to me its like, if its forced AND theres no orgasm then its rape. I mean, COME ON, she was enjoying herself !