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for #1 ~ What Was I Thinking? ~ Part 1

by Ms_Figg

person Anon
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The brainy, intellectual Hermione was gone now, driven out by the animal that was Severus Snape. - Brilliant!! Loved it.
person Angie
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was one of the hottest stories I have ever read. You are truly talented. Great Job!
person anon
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you\'ve really got to update the sequel to this story. i absolutely love the way you write and i can\'t wait to see how the couple will overcome their issues.
person luvssnape
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again lovely chapter. I laughed out loud about the \"did she just call me baby\" comment. Very funny!
person deathraven
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh i don\'t want it to be over i just love your story soo fucking much!! ~*TEAR*~ oh its such a good story ~*TEAR*~ you will just have to write another stroy now wont you,~*SMILY TEAR*~. oh fuck it i\'m sad oh well i hope you will write another story you are a really good writer!! ~*one last TEAR*~
person me
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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person ladyofthemasque
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, hon, this isn\'t an epilogue. This is a continuation chapter. An epilogue wraps up loose threads in the tapestry of your story. You just dangled several more in front of your readers, and you didn\'t even tie them into a decorative fringe. Bad author. Finish the tale as it should be finished, even if it takes you several more chapters. ~Lotm (who rarely leaves reviews on this site, so consider yourself warned)
person Serentipity01
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you\'ve got a bit of a taste for sadism, don\'t ya? Well, blackmail at least ;) OF COURSE you have to write a sequel - can\'t let all these delicious unspoken thoughts and secrets go to waste! So take a break, relax, take loads of bubble baths and then get back to your computer to GIVE US MORE! *beggingonmyknees*
person snapescat
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thankyou for continuing. I look forward to the story unfolding.
person Septentrion
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
if reviewers are all you need to provide us with a sequel, then I shall provide you with a review : I\'ve loved this story but it has left me starving. Hell, you left too many loose knots ! You just have to tie them now ;-)