rate_review Reviews

Anna: I appreciate your review. I would like to state however that this story is PORN, and there\'s a lot of humping and pumping in Porn. That\'s its reason for being. Sorry if you didn\'t like the sex scenes. But.....

Prerequiste for Porn: Men with huge penises and lots of stamina.

Although I appreciate you expressing interest in reading more of my work, I wouldn\'t suggest reading What Was I Thinking ~ Part 2. Even though it has somewhat more of a plot, it is still smut, and there are graphic sex scenes there along the very lines you dislike, that would probably offend you very, very, very much. I would rather you not read my work, than read it and feel let down in any way. There are other, much better writers than me out here that are probably more suited to your tastes. Thank you for reviewing.

While I\'m not very good with a review in true form, I can honestly say that this was a fantastic PWP. The story was well written and, well, \'Holy Smut Batman\'. Very hot and lemony fresh. Off to read pt.2. Thanks for the entertainment!

Pumping back and forth for ages doesn\'t suggest a sexgod to me. Being a sexy, good lover is about a lot more than having a big penis and stamina. This sex was just bad and boring. The beginning of this fic was really excellent which is why I felt so let down by the fulfilment of all Severus\' teasing. You are a great writer and I might certainly look for more of your fics in the future but for now I feel a bit put off by our different views on sexyness or whatever I should call it. Please don\'t feel discouraged but this is just my honest opinion.

Love, Anna

Loved it. Very passionate, and not just a randy piece of smut. I enjoyed how you kept the characters true to the traits they held, even if it meant no sappy happy ending. Well done.

Oh me oh my, but that was so HOT! I look forward to reading part 2, but now I\'ve got to take a breather (fans face with hand)

that was such a good story! i loved it..it was the perfect balance of everything and i really enjoyed reading it!!! thank u for that story and i just wanted to say great job and i love ur writing!!!

Oh, finally!!! It felt like my computer has been down for years instead of days! What a glorious way to finish up, dearie! I can now congratulate you on your fine lemonade!!! Woo-eee!!! And I must add, that is a very big compliment coming from a born and bred true Southerner like myself! You make it just right- really sour! Yum, yum!!! But you do know how we Southerners love our lemonade! Can\'t wait to check out your sequel. As always I will be expecting great things from you, terribly erotic, but great things!!! Happy writing, mi chicquita!!! Tengo que irme! Salud!
Hugs and kisses!
Killer K :)

Bravo!

i really enjoyed this. nice smut and a
lovely, snarky, nasty Potions Master
to lust over.

well done.

~blessings~
ldf

Thou art very cruel if you do not get them together!!!But oh well, at least you keep Snape in character. Please get them together!!!Pleading. I will send chocolate.