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for #1 ~ What Was I Thinking? ~ Part 1

by Ms_Figg

person Chavela
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1

What a great start, I love this already. I swear every story you write, I love right away. LOL!
person Chavela
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2

that sweet fruit of good and evil that hung low and pungent between his thighs

Okay, I want a piece of that damn fruit! OMG!
person Bec
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! That is all I can say
person Morticia Heartless
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ms Figg, you will find that on-line translations sites can fail you. I have a 3 part dictionary that is much easyer to use. I found that some English words are simplly not there. EX: forever is translated as "For All Eternity".
person purrfus
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I followed a recommendation from Ladytalon to your stories, and I am so glad I did.

I was a little confused as I read the story until I reached the part where you explanined PWP as "Porn with Plot." I had always seen PWP as "Plot, What Plot?" I like your version.

I can't wait to read the rest of your work.

person Claudia
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A really great story. You are not only writing the most "inspiring" lemons I ever read , in this story I had so much laughters to enjoy. Absolutely great !
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person Alexis
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok i'm on ch4 right now and i know there are more but i had to stop and review because i love your story so far, but one line just cracked me up. Really i just started laughing out loud because it was brilliant it was the line: "Harry could have sworn he saw a flash of premeditated murder in her eyes" OMG the premeditated murder art is awesome. I love this story. You're a great author and now i am off to read the rest. Keep writing cuz you are bloody brilliant!
person HighSign
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
'I am ready to gather the lemons in for harvest. I doubt there will be any sugar to be found.'

Lovely turn of phrase. You are clearly twisted and evil, and I mean that as a mark of the highest respect. '-)

Damn it, now I'm going to have to read everything you've ever written (that I can find). This is your fault, you know!

-HighSign
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I can't believe I waited this long to read this one. I'm sorry about that now. This story rocked! I loved it! Going to find more of your stories I have yet to read!

Your biggest fan,
Tiffany