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Oh damn, how can you just leave it like that? I\'m glad she tore Ron a new one. Men need that sometimes. I guess since you left a cliffy my only consolation can be that you have been updating frequently. I can\'t wait for that \"interception.\"

*takes a deep breath and begins to type. stops. realises she cant say anything much. frowns at herself and tries again* wow... you have the most beautiful lyrical style, your imagery is *flaps again as she cant get the right word* wow. Fantastic. Wonderful. Sensuous. Alluring. Inveigling. And Bewitching.

Hi!

I just read your story through to chapter five and I am absolutely hooked. Can\'t wait for the lemons you promised ;)

The \'private\' dialogue was easy to follow, no worries there :)

I love your style of writing, especially the fact that you tell the story alternating between Herminoe\'s and Severus\' point of view - makes for highy entertaining reading *sigh*

I\'m curious, will you enter an emotional level to the pending relationship between them? I\'ll confess, I\'m a sucker for emotional entanglements on top of physical action ;)

Guess I\'ll have to wait and see like everybody else, then ...

Two thumbs up for your work and virtual moral support for the continuation.

Serendipity01

I thought it was very easy to understand - I mean Severus was calling all the shots, so he was the one with the longer and stronger dialogue, with Hermione answering.... have H: and S: would have broken the flow of it!!!

This chapter was amazing, and I hope to god you update soon....this chapter had me going crazy!

I thank you from the bottom of my heart for not labeling the dialog. That would have been extremely juvenile.

Wow!!!! This is fantastic so far. (I\'m getting mighty thirsty for handsqueezed lemonade!!)

This story rocks! It\'s a testament to how good I find this story that you have reduced me to writing such things. By the way, bite as hard as you want. It\'s sort of a kink of mine ;)>

really great chapter. i cant wait until u update!!

AHHH!! This is such a wonderful story!!! Not only is it really well written - the dream was just insane - but it\'s a great plot and the characters and the whole story... Wow. I\'m really stoked to continue with this story. I hope you plan on continuing with it soon! THANKS so much :)

Good for Hermione - well said!

You\'re building up the tension nicely, and I\'m looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Just one tiny thing though - it\'s Hermione not Hermoine. An easy mistake to make.