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for #1 ~ What Was I Thinking? ~ Part 1

by Ms_Figg

person DawnEB
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, citrus is very good for colds. Why don\'t you just immerse yourself in lemon, then share with the rest of us? ;) I like your nasty snarky Severus, with just the slightest inkling of a conscience ruthlessly subdued.
person MyEmeraldEyes
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your not stopping there are you? I am simply going to say: I like it, no actually I love it! Hehe Hope you update soon.
person luvssnape
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story. I love the way you portray snape. I love my Snape dark and cruel and sarcastic. I can\'t wait to see what happens next. I am happy that you update so frequently. Looking forward to more!!!
person firewall
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is definitely developing into a really interesting and well-developed story. Thanks for sharing it with us. Gotta love an egocentric selfish Snape. BUT I could give Hermione a good swift boot in the butt...I hope she develops a bit of backbone.
person lindsey
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
one of the best stories i\'ve read so far...ur a really great writer and i like ur style of writing! i can\'t wait for the next update for this story!
person Anon
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Squeeze the lemons !!!!!!!Squeeze them!!!!!
person Lord Voldemort
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would just like to say that I rather object to the fact that I am hardly in this story at all. Severus Snape is nothing but a snivelling piece of traitorous filth.You must stop writing about him \"getting laid\" as you Muggles put it, and let MOI deflower the delectable Miss Granger instead.I am the Dark Lord.Everyone knows that means I will be a much better shag and far more evil to boot. I order you to write sexy lemons about Lord Voldemort and beeeeyoutiful LAYDEEZ this instant.
Love from
The Dark Lord xx
person Yabo
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear lord! I think I need to start smoking if I want to finish the rest of this. Great job, keep it up!
person Anon
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So good! You have to update soon. Just.. wow. I never thought of their relationship that way. Update woman!
person ancientgirl
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aha, I see no sweet Snape in the future. Dark Snape to come. I can\'t wait for the next chapter.