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for #1 ~ What Was I Thinking? ~ Part 1

by Ms_Figg

person Cindy
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is so good! I can\'t wait to read the next chapter!
person nothingness
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg!! that is sooo hot. you\'ve got to update soon or i might just explode!!
~hugs, nothingness~
person Scully_m_
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very very entertaining. I just finished reading this from start to ... well... now. I turly enjoyed their mental meeting. It was quite clear who was saying what so have no worries there. I love how Hermoine was \'stiffly\' packing her things and kept on thinking \'He has sent for me\'. I can not wait for more.
person cboyer21
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, blackmail worked to get me to review, something I rarely do. I can\'t wait to see what you have planned next
person JTBJAB
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh mn you have to update again soon - you are not jus torturing Hermione, but me and the rest of the readers too!!!!

I hope you feel better, cause real life sucks, so get well soon - but don\'t push yourself to write the next chapter if you feel too bad.
person firewall
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, the game is afoot and by the glittering of Snape\'s eyes, he\'s enjoying every second of the foreplay. LOL I am glad to hear that Hermione still has some gumption, I\'d hate for her to be a doormat and a snarky Snape needs someone who will stand up to him. Here\'s hoping for another chapter tonight. *fingers crossed*
person BeautifullyMalicious
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best HG/SS\'s that I\'ve come across in a while. The UST is simply divine. Keep writing, I\'m DYING to read the smut!
person TheAngelOfSilence
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wahey!!!!Come on , my dear, harvest those lemons from the tree! I for one cannot wait!
person Killer Kadoogan
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Smashing story, dearie!!! I just love it! You must realize that you have been way too much of a tease thus far! Naughty git! Now you shall be punished- enter Snape with a whip and various other punishments. Seriously though this is some very great writing! You have a really good way of teasing us along and we still come back for more! And I, too, like my Snape just the way you write him. You have done a wonderful job of staying true to the character and adding your own unique flavor to him. Bravo, sweetie!!! I am anxiously awaiting the \"deflowering\" and I hope that much shagging will ensue(is that spelled right? Oh well, much too lazy to get up and check)! Much happy writing, mi chicquita! Tengo que irme! Salud!
Hugs and kisses!
Killer K (Lovin\' my Snape!!!)
person Medea
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A writer after my own heart then ,) I hate Fluffy Severus.. its just not canon and its just not Severus. He\'s a bastard, thats why we love him because woman love bastards. Lets face it, we wouldnt be the shippers we are if we didnt want deep down what this story is portraying ,)