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for #1 ~ What Was I Thinking? ~ Part 1

by Ms_Figg

person EriWren
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I love this. LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!
person lovethelab
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW That is about all my lust-addled mind can come up with right now! WOW!!!
person Anon
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh i just love your story you just have to keep going your really good at smut, just thought that i should tell you. well i can\'t wait for the next chapter. love it love it!! UPDATE and soon please. ~*giggle*~
person Zoltaire the Inscrutable
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Belly dancing, eh? I think I saw a video on that in wally-world the other day. something like Fina and Nina Teach the Art or some such. Who would have thought it could be used in that fashion?!

Bravo, Ms_Figg, Bravo. Encore! Many, many, many more encores, if you please.

One thing. I believe you spelled McGonagall\'s name wrong. (Please don\'t ask me how that managed to jump out at me in the middle of all that lemony goodness. Heaven\'s honest truth, I don\'t know)

As always, \'twas wonderful. Taa.

Zoltaire the Inscrutable
person JTBJAB
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, how the hell can he even think about giving her up after that?!?!?!?!

I can\'t wait till the next chapter arrives!!!!
person Anon
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh heh! A truly magnificent bumper harvest of juicy lemons!
person luvssnape
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please update soon. I can\'t stand to wait. AAAAAAAhhhhhh!!! I need to read more. oh sorry I was freaking out there for a second. Anyways I love the note that Severus sent. Especially the part about not wearing makeup because it would just run, that was some good stuff. Anyways I hope to you update soon.
person Lorelie79
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Jumps up and down*
Please post more!

This is really good and it\'s sucked me right in. Excelent job!
person nothingness
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I for one really enjoy your story alot! i think you need to update asap! ahhh, but seriously, i really love this fic and cant wait till you post!!!
person EriWren
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this. It\'s my very favorite. I literally sat and read it from chapter one all the way through. You are good.