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April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, yes, I lie the orbs as well. yummmy!
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! :D
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September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update this!! I LOVE IT!!! ADD MORE!!!
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Please tell us you have more...or better, just post it soon! I really like this. They just got straight to it...no games. just some orbs (ha-ha).
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story line. I can\'t wait to see what the hell these orbs are though...wish i had some... LoL
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks god for those orbs.
Great Part.
Great Part.
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*GRINS* Keep Updating. Really good story.
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved that. The orb idea was very interesting and you are very descriptive.
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a pretty good scene. I liked that the orbs made them realize their true desires. Will there be more?