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I completely agree with you on the Harry/Draco issue. They

hey kindal here agian, absolutly lovin it. as for the questions she should soo totally snap out of it during the summer but like at the end. oh also question bout the fick this isn\'t one of those where like every fucking person at hogwarts suddenly turns gay because thats just unbelievable, and it kinda pisses me off! ;p

Great start to this! But what a spot to stop! More please.

You\'re making it so Remus doesn\'t know about the abuse? That\'s cool. Let\'s see....Ron and Hermione have decided they hate Harry? You\'re making him punkish? or not? LoL. I\'m liking where this is going with the Remus-stepping-in-and-making-sure-Harry-is-taken-care-of-thingy. He\'s had a rought time of it and needs someone to take care of him. Mmmm Harry in leather, low riding leather. Drool worthy. I hope you don\'t plan to make Harry all powerful or anything. Those stories are boring and completely pointless (expect for the few {very, very, very, few} times I\'ve seen them done well. I really like where this is going. Are you planning on updating every day or was this just a special type thingy?

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Hermione needs to snap out of it. I love it when Ron is a jerk but hermione still sticks by harry. great story

Great story! I think hermione should snap out of it but not until their in school, because unless harry will be going to the burrow during the summer she will be around ron the most. and it is easy to get rapped up in a new relationship, but having her see the new harry will most likely be like a slap upside the head making her rememeber there is a world outside of the relationship.

omg...this is fantastic. I love how you are writing it. I am ready for the next chapter already. I really want to see a huge blow-up between Ron and Harry, I don\'t know why I love that with Hermione caught in the middle...wavering on which side to choose.

I love the groundwork that you are doing. I have the same problem when I write. my current fic has a bit too much het for my taste in it, but it was all needed to get up to the slash, not that there will be tons of it just yet either...so I totally understand. This is fantastic though. I will have to keep my eyes out for it!

Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 4! I agree to some extent on Harry being all powerful. He has to be to some extent. After all he is the one marked to be Voldemort\'s equal but that doesn\'t mean he has to have every single special power out there. I so agree about Harry and Draco falling in love minutes after making a truce. Now I can understand if that was the motivation behind it but coming together immediately... no way! You might feel that way but there is that thing called trust. They\'ve hurt and angered each other for years. You can\'t get over that immediately! *hops off soap box* My apologies. Anyway! Remus saw the scars and the sliced word. He\'s beginning to learn things and understand. I know it\'s not probable if you want to stay true to the story but as the reader I\'m shouting at my moniter, \"How can you miss that? You see he\'s underweight. You see the scars. Can you not smell the blood? Hello you\'re a werewolf.\" But I do that to movies and tv shows as well. *smile* Love the story! I think this is the longest review I\'ve ever written!

Hermione should definitely snap out of!, and not abandon Harry when she finds out what we already know, and Harry doesn\'t... ^_~ I happen to lie storied where Harry is powerful and not a weakling. I also happen to like stories where voldemort is dead, hence all of my fics... but anyway, enough about me, love the story, keep going! and don\'t let Ron be too much of an ass for too long!

i think hermoine should snap out of it at school when harry is getting into hi own thing when she sees harry and draco together or something like that.