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for No More Hiding

by berkobtch

person jillypooh
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Spunky little dream sequence thingy there. Can\'t wait to see what Snapes gonna say!
person WynterRose
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another awesome chapter. I love it. It isn\'t being rushed, we are learning about each character before we get into the heart of the story. totally awesome. I stayed up just to read it tonight.
person jillypooh
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love your story, I can\'t wait to see what\'s going to happen! I really don\'t like Ron! But I love a Mentor, Father Figure, Remus. Keep up the great work!
person Amessis
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice job! You did a good job on the sex scene. Hopefully it\'ll be more than a fantasy soon.
person Nova
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I always love a good \"coming out from the closed\" story:) I can\'t wait for more! And ofcourse, coming slash is a plus too:)
person Kit
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohh I like this so far, nice groundwork. Can\'t wait to see where you go with this.

as for your question - I think Hermione should realise what Ron\'s up to once they\'re all back at Hogwarts...but then I like a lil bit of angst!

person lilywood
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Keep writing! I\'m not a fan of Ron and Hermione, so do what you like with them! I do like it when Ron gets his.
person scully
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story! i like it a lot. i like how harry is trying to \"find\" himself and that you included remus as his mentor for the process. ron is a git! hermoine should snap out of it soon after they get to hogwarts (or whenever the first time she and ron see harry). i think when harry stands up for himself and she sees the NEW harry that she can realize that she and ron have been prats and then she can start to be friends with harry again. just my suggestion to your question! but, mmm, yeah, i\'d like some slashy goodness soon. maybe a dream for harry--a vivid, DETAILED dream--that way you dont have to rush your plot and have draco and harry jump into bed 5 minutes after seeding each other. again--just an idea!
please post more chapters soon!
person thrnbrooke
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
TVs are my big inanimate conversation partner. Hehehehe. Poor Harry! I hope he blows everyone away! Will he be up there with Draco and Hermione in grades? What happens in Diagon Alley? Can\'t wait for chapter 5!
person ladynight
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter! Update soon.