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Great updated chapters! Ah, a nice sexy scene--good job on that. Harry did quite a nice solo job on himself. :) really, for your first non het couple sex scene, that was quite hot! cant wait to see harry get trained up and what other secrets he might spill to remus. then of course--on to draco! ;) i would be honoured to beta for you by the way--i will email you.

Great updated chapters! Ah, a nice sexy scene--good job on that. Harry did quite a nice solo job on himself. :) really, for your first non het couple sex scene, that was quite hot! cant wait to see harry get trained up and what other secrets he might spill to remus. then of course--on to draco! ;) i would be honoured to beta for you by the way--i will email you.

That was your first? Holy moly! I can\'t wait for chapter 6! What does Severus have to say?

Well the whole Dumbledore not turning into what-his-face, Grindenwald is a good thing. I\'m glad about the list, I\'ve been wondering what could be on it and how you\'re going to take Harry\'s character.

The sex scene was fine. I really liked it and you can\'t tell that its your first male sex scene. I hope you have more of them. ;)

Are you going to go into details about the training. I hate it when Harry can just become a fighting expert in just a few months. I mean even if a person was to start training today and train, just on that, every day they still wouldn\'t become experts for years. Granted Wizards aren\'t exactly known for hand-to-hand and just a little training would put Harry far above them, unless you\'re going to make it so all purebloods take fencing (which I can really see happening). Are you going to have Harry training his Slytherin \'gifts\'.

What are you going to do with the rest of the school? Ron hates him, are you going to have the res of them turn against him too? You\'ve probably aready answered this, if so ignor me. I\'m going to go back and re-read the chapters again. I read too many fanfics, kinda hard to keep them straigth, LoL. Are you going to have the Slytherins turn good, or for that matter Draco? Or are you going to have Harry and Remus turn bad. (For some reason I really can\'t see Remus abounding Harry for anything. Like a Wolf thing or something.)

I suppose that\'s it. Off to school again (yeah schools alright, I only have four classes so its all good LoL).

Happy Writings

You truly have the makings of a great story so keep up the great work! I only ask that you update the story soon and often.

Again, another fantabulous chapter. I loved how Remus stormed in and flat out said he wasn\'t taking no for an answer. No, it wasn\'t rushed at all. A perfect lil chapter. I love Harry not caring that the werewolf was downstairs while he fantasized. He was an actual \"teen\" for a change.

as far as beta goes...I can help if you want me to. wynter.rose@gmail.com let me know. The only thing is I work every day 8-5.

Love the story so far. I saw your list of hates in the author comment section and agree with a lot of them. My biggest one is the \"let people walk all over him and run his life thing\". Mostly I see that from Hermione and it really bugs me. I am not a huge fan of hers...ok, pretty much I can\'t stand her. When she gets all pushy and expects him to spill his guts on everything and he does. It like strips him of his masculinity. I think Harry and Draco immediatly falling in love is also unbelievable, but I also think that there is a thin line between love and hate. All that passion in fights and arguements can easily turn into lust when attraction is there. That is different from instant love, but is also a huge possibility. As far as Hermione and Ron, well I think that Ron has a history of being fickle, but I also think you are being a tad bit hard on him. Of course it is the writer\'s perogative on how the character is viewed, but I think that although he reacts quicker in the negative, I do think that he has a big love for Harry. Of course for your plot that might be needed. As far as reactions to him being gay. Have you said whether gay relationships are normal or not in the wizarding world? I guess it would depend on that. If you have it more acceptable, Ron being a pureblood would know this and wouldn\'t think anything of it. Also, it would close any ideas he might have on Harry stealing Hermione. On the other hand, Hermione being raised muggle, where this kind of thing isn\'t as acceptable might have a problem with it. Friend or not of Harry\'s. And yes I know that a lot of girls dream of a gay best friend, but I know just as many girls/women here and in Europe that think it is gross and wrong. I love Remus\' role in this story. He is what Harry needs, a loving support that will not be shaken. I think that is great. Well, I hope to see an update soon. And if you still need a beta, I would be interested.

Another great chapter. I especially liked the last part. *lecherous grin*

Sweet. How long do you think this is going to be all together? LoL I\'m not in your head. Great minds just think alike. Are you ever going to write out the complete list for us? Pretty please with cherries on top? I really like how you go from Remus to Harry. The transistions great and its not at all confusing, unlike some stories where your halfway through four pages before you realize that your no longer in Harry\'s head you\'re in Colins, no not really just an example. I like how Harry\'s being mature about his abuse (well mature probably isn\'t the best word but you know what I mean). It follows canon really well. If he was all freaked out about the abuse then he would have gone to the papers long ago and told them that his family was abusing him, even if he didn\'t like all the hype about him. I\'m so glad this isn\'t going to be an \'Harry\'s gay Hate him now!\' fic. I hate those too. I just really can\'t see the whole wizarding world turning on Harry like that. I mean even if being gay wasn\'t execptable I\'m sure they\'d make it execptablable just because he\'s Harry Potter.


Are you going to have Harry train in physical combat? I mean wizards use wands. They don\'t expect you to come off and punch them. It seems a smart thing to do. What else kind of training are you going to give him? I don\'t mind stories where Harry gets more powers, because to me Hogwarts doesn\'t really play up peoples strenghts, but like we both agree I hate it when Harry gets so many new powers that he\'s the strongest person to have ever lived and woe is me!

Are you going to have Dumbledore an evil person or just a careless old man who made a few mistakes? Gods I\'ve got to get to school :(

Happy Writings.

W00t. Great chapter. I like the way you are taking the time to develop the story, and not just doing something like, oh, I dunno, Harry and Draco meeting in the first chapter, start snogging, and suddenly they are in love. Your style is really good. Here, have a cookie. *gives you a cookie*